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Reviews for A Time for Changes

By : Fuafuru46
  • From SereneViper on July 25, 2011
    More!! :) i love this story!! i can't wait til i read even more!!
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  • From Vyper on July 22, 2011
    Kikyo sure seems nosy about Sango and Miroku's relationship for someone who is never around much for Inuyasha and I doubt she is going to stick around. Poor Inuyasha is going to get his heart broken.
    I also like that Kagome is being one with her inner demon. That is pretty cool and I wonder if she can control all three parts of herself. The demon, the priestess, and her human self.
    Sesshoumaru seems to be interested in Kagome for some reason which still bothers me a bit since it is like he wants to use Kagome to get to his little brother. Still, I love him. Sesshoumaru is so handsome and sexy that it is no wonder her demon seems to want him. I just wonder if Kagome will break through before it is too late to stop her demon from obtaining the relic if Sesshoumaru even has one. He could be just fucking with her.
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  • From Vyper on July 17, 2011
    Why does Sesshoumaru want Kagome to bring him his brother when he can get Inuyasha any time he wants to? Seems odd to me. Still, very interesting chapter I hope to read more.
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  • From inuyashaloverr on July 13, 2011
    I like this very much, just not sure on how to receive update notices. Anyways, other than a few minor grammatical errors, love the story. Keep it up! ;)
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  • From Vyper on July 09, 2011
    I love this story. I hope to read more chapters as you continue on. I also love that Kagome is an artist in this story. If you can, please e mail me when you do an update. My e mail addresss is vyperbites@yahoo.com.
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  • From weyrdkat on June 14, 2011
    I'm so glad you've decided to update this story -- it put it on the top of the page, where I found it. I think the flow of the story is going well, and so is your dialogue, but in a couple of the earlier chapters, I found it hard to trace the breaks in the narrative and switches to other people. Other than that, I think the premise is good and it has a lot of potential.

    Kat -- weyrdkat@msn.com
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  • From Alpine02 on December 29, 2008
    Great story.. I really hope to see more...
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  • From cukid9 on May 01, 2008
    Hurray!

    I mean, that you updated, of course...not really hurray about what happened in this chapter because that was all very sad. I was happy to see Inuyasha wanting to make amends for his shitty comment (and that Kagome called him out on it). Although, I wanted to shake him when he was thinking maybe he should be trying to put things right with Kikyo instead of Kagome. But all that with Koga's mother...I may have teared up just a little. Like I said before, I'm usually not a Koga fan, but he was trying to be so nice and then his mother just has to come and mess everything up. And poor Kags...sheesh. Girl just can't catch a break.

    Great chapter, chock-full of emotion. Although I've liked the way you've written Kagome and Koga together, I'm looking forward to more Inu/Kags interaction! I'll be looking forward to your next update!

    ~cu-kid
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  • From zianeu on April 29, 2008
    Gosh! Finally got up to date on this and I have to say, it's a compelling AU. I'm feeling with the characters as they go, and you appear to have given more thought to the social and political order than some writers who do a modern human/demon AU.

    I look forward to more. Thank you.
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  • From kookookitty on April 28, 2008
    good story, interesting characterizations and you've revealed a lot... at least as much as the characters know. kagome's premonitions and insights manifested in her art and nightmares and what it all means. what kikyo's up to and what she's planning with yash. if kagome's parents' and brother's deaths are related and the whole mystery surrounding them.

    captivating and enthralling.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From cukid9 on March 21, 2008
    I know I read the first few chapters of this awhile ago...and I have no idea why I didn't review then. I love -LOVE!- this story. I love that Kagome and Inuyasha don't immediately hook up. I love, especially, how you've written Kouga -I get tired of him being a snotty asshole to everyone, and that whole "My woman" stuff all the time gets irritating too. I like how affectionate he is toward Kagome, but you keep him in-character with his attitude toward Inuyasha. I have to say that this is the most interesting version of him I have ever read.

    I don't think you should worry about Inuayasha being OOC. For one, since this is an AU story and he's older, I think exploring the differences in his attitude and responses to things is a necessity. I think he cusses just enough and still has enough of that stubborn I-don't-give-a-shit attitude to make him who he is.

    I can't really think of any con-crit to give you other than minor spelling/grammatical mistakes -all of which could be fixed with a good round of editing. I was nearly in tears when Kagome found out her brother was dead, and was just as mad as she was at Inuyasha's description of her as "nothing special" (what a jerk!!). And I think I was holding my breath when she and Kouga kissed at the end of the last chapter. For whatever reason, even though I'm a die-hard Inu/Kag fan, that didn't upset me. It just seemed so natural that it should happen.

    It's been awhile since I've read an Inuyasha fanfic that I'm completely enthralled with. I can't wait to see where you take this story.


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  • From abelton on March 13, 2008
    I like so far please continue writting this story.
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  • From nmos on February 25, 2008
    very nice update.
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  • From Fuafuru46 on February 19, 2008
    Don't worry everyone, it's just a plot twist. You'll be happy next chapter Stella, just you wait.
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  • From ShadowStar666 on February 15, 2008
    how dare you make me cry! *sniff, sniff* please update, you made me sad. and i really like this fic. please? good fic. love the coinsidences with peoples. still... so sad.
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