Hello Fuafuru46 

I'd say that chapter moved things along VERY nicely... I got chills reading that last paragraph, but I'm THRILLED that Inuyasha is finally breaking away from Kikyo, though I hope that Kagome wakes up in time to finish her exibition, or, you know, just WAKES UP! 

What's up with these cliffies btw? 

I don't know when you last updated this story, but, you've been writing since 2007! That's 13 YEARS from my perspective in October of 2020, and a whole lot of time for an author to have writers block. Not that I can say how long an author can get writers block for... My longest period was, I think, 6 years? I get it though. New ideas completely swamp you or they leave you high and dry and there is NO in-between. I REALLY hope you continue the story though, I'm REALLY looking forward to how this whole thing ends! 

Anyway, best of luck with your continued writing adventures. 

Yours, 

Hana 

Oh my GOD, that woman is such a BITCH! 

Like, oh, sure, he's supposed to just KNOW that you want him to propose so that you feel secure in your relationship! If you DON'T feel secure in your relationship WITHOUT a ring, then that just means you have some SERIOUS trust issues... among many, many, MANY other faults. And while not all faults are BAD, some of the ones Kikyo has DEFINITELY are! 

"Inuyasha, honey, if you listen to your heart for just a FRACTION of a second, make peace with your past with Kikyo and go back to Kagome as QUICKLY as you can!" 

Yours, 

Hana 

Oh boy... So much goes wrong in so little time. 

Miroku's gone full over-protective-brother-mode after learning where Kagome is; Inuyasha still hates Kouga's guts; Kagome just went right ahead and tried to USE the relic as soon as she found it, which lead to a great deal of pain on her part, AND her vanishing again; and Inuyasha STILL hasn't realised that Kikyo is his PAST, and he should just fucking LEAVE HER THERE! 

The only upside to this huge mess, is that Sesshomara and Tsuki FINALLY shared a kiss! 

I look forward to your climactic conclusion, dear author. 

Yours, 

Hana 

YEESSS!!! Finally, some Tsuki and Sesshomaru time! 

Now, don't get me wrong, I LOVE Inuyasha and Kagome, but I ALSO have a soft spot for Tsuki and Sesshomaru.

I just want everyone to be happy! 

I hope they somehow manage to replicate Kagome's body, so that she and Tsuki can live their lives like the sisters they've become... Because, though I love Kagome as she is, keeping Tsuki trapped isn't right, and neither is the fact that, because they share a body, they can't completely be with the person they love! 

Ah, that was a nice change of pace. 

And getting a little more broship (is that a word? Like friendship, between guys, who are more like brothers?) between Inuyasha and Miroku was nice too. 

Hana 

And... he went to America with Kikyo, that freaking NUMBSKULL! 

Let's just hope he either comes back earlier, or comes back as planned, because I REALLY don't know how Kagome, and Tsuki, will deal with seeing Kouga (again) when noone is currently there for her. 

"And so, the gears of fate creak to life once more." 

I doubt Inuyasha is going to go to America with Kikyo, and, even if he does, he won't stay... But Kouga coming back to Japan is going to be... interesting.

Ah, the half-brothers reunion... It was only a matter of time :) 

Priestess powers come out to PLAY! 

Heh, this was a fun chapter to read... and Kagome getting invited to a celebration in her honour on Friday is going to be FUN! 

Oh thank GOD she's leaving! 

I just hope that, THIS time, Inuyasha makes a clean break from her, since theirs is clearly a toxic relationship, escpecially to him! 

...And I want him and Kagome to get together! 

AHA! So there IS a Rin in this story! 

...Wonder how, and even if, she ties in with Sesshomaru later. 

Ooo, are those last lines symbolism for Kagome moving on from Kouga AND taking more of an interest in Inuyasha? Because I REALLY hope they ge together at some point! 

Hana 

So... Here's a question... Are the angry instances with amnesia because she hasn'T yet learned to understand or communicate with her new beast? Or do they have something to do with her miko background? 

Oh, and does she still have miko powers if Inuyasha's blood won? 

Hana 

...I am SLOWLY coming to like the way this is headed. 

Still, Kagome now being a part of Inuyasha's pack, and Kouga still in love with her, and Ayame not yet in the picture, and Kikyo still IN the picture, is going to keep the story fairly tense, if not interesting, for a while longer. 

Hana 

My revelations after this chapter (this chapter being 6): Kouga's family is most likely demon yakuza; His parents were probably the ones who killed Kagome's parents; Kagome is a miko, but she herself is unaware of her power; Kagome is probably far more powerful AND unstable than anyone realises; Inuyasha will likely have to save Kagome from becoming a test subject for whatever blackmarket work Kikyo is involved in regarding the demon blood in her body; and this story is surprisingly alot darker and violent than the stories I usually read... 

Hana