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Reviews for She Who the Prophecy Foretold

By : SunsetMiko

From ANON - faye on February 25, 2013
i love to read she who the prophecy fortold but the last chapter i read was chapter 80 and that was on a single spark, but now i can't get it so i read it on dokuga but it goes to chapter 79 or 80. have you wrote anymore yet i would love to read more
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From ANON - Legilmyth on June 10, 2011
I know its been a long time. But it would be so awesome to see this story finished. it has such a wonderful plot.
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From ANON - Aaliyah Starnight on December 08, 2010
OMG i love your story, does not matter how many times I read it i fall in love with it all over again, i did reread The Syndrome and i love the new chapters that was added. Sorry I have not been around lately, just finshed school and everything and getting ready to move in with my fiance and it is just a big ole mess.. *sighs* you should email me and and things so we can catch up.. georgiabrown1987@yahoo.com
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From lara5170 on November 20, 2010
This story is great....its intricate, intense & unique. What an amazing mind it must take to come up with something like this. I was overwhelmed by ch 19 & the story was just starting at the point.It keeps getting more & more amazing. Then I got to ch 21 & we're introduced to "The Prophecy" mentioned in the title of the story. It's like now the amazing story is really just geting started. Now that I have read all of the 33 chapters written I have to think I thought at some point earlier in the story Kaede mentioned that she has something also to give Kagome something that someone gave her a very long time ago & told her to hold onto it & not give her it until the time was right....I could be wrong about this but then how else would she know about this prophecy.If I am right then now that Kagome knows shouldn't Kaede have given her whatever she is holding.Unless what she is holding has to do with Rin but I don't think so. I also don't know why but when I first read the actual prophecy I thought a girl was mentioned & thought it meant Rin but when the prophecy was read aloud by Miroku in front of the group it wasn't mentioned. During the actual prophecy begins with: the girl of 2 era's dragged into the past,cursed jewel of 4 souls torn from her body & shattered all over Japan.Starting her journey to meet each person,not by name, but what they represented (4 parts)courage,knowledge,friendship & love..then she must have her soul intact again(undead kikyo killed).Then 3 events that needed to happen before she could be told who she was & what her destiny was.The 3 events were actually gifts/markings of 9 specific demons:7 pups gave marks of love for a mother,Sessh gave the mark of the night sky,Shippo's name means 7 treasures & his mark is blue flames ...& then "She will be given the Arrow of Destiny to always point her in the right direction.She must then follow where it will lead her,to find that which will Form the bridge of powers,initiating the transformation necessary to defeat the great evil" ...we know the arrow will lead to her father living in the past who has been something of great power & importance. I can't imagine what her dad is like & if he's human & then what the bridge is & the transformation it'll initiate....What is Kagome? A great priestess, yes...but why can she retain youkai without her miko powers purifying it....will she become a powerful Miko-Inu-Youkai with a bit of fox youkai(I say mainly inuyoukai since she's surrounded by 8 & 1/2 & marked by 8 inu demons & 1 fox-fire demon) I can't wait to see what's next

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From lara5170 on November 19, 2010
I've been unable to stop reading this story since I began & now I've read 19 chaps without taking a break long enough to review.I hope I can be forgiven my rudeness.I really enjoyed the story & meant to review many times & much sooner.I hope this story isn't abandoned or I think I'll die a slow,painful death.I still have more to read as I believe there are more chaps available & I'll try to review more frequently.I enjoyed this story so much & I feel guilty.I tried reading this once & when I read Sessh had pups of his own, I stopped reading.I really want to see Sessh & Kagome together & couldn't see a way for them to become a family if he had one already or one that consisted of many women.
I haven't finished reading what is written yet but if it's not finished ...................pls update & complete I love this story & can't wait to see where it's going & how it'll end.
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From ANON - faye on August 26, 2010
i still love this story but since i can't read it on a single spark anymore please finish it on adultfanfiction i would love to finish reading it last went to 80 chapter thats were i left off.
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From ANON - SyntricSam on August 10, 2010
Ya'know, you've got this habit of leaving things at the best part -_-

I've fallen head over heals for all your work on this site. This one is, again, one of the best Sess/Kag pairings I've read with little to no out of character feelings. I like how in this story, you've turned Sess's mom into a more kind-hearted person. I don't utterly despise her. Wonderful work my dear and I am eagerly awaiting all your updates!
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From angelnomiko on April 28, 2010
wow that was awsome..... please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

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From apassino on April 11, 2010
I love love love this story. I don't know how I had missed it before, but I'm all finished with chapter 33 now and can not wait to read more. I had read most of your stories and they are wonderful. I read the stories on my cell phone and my boyfriend seems to think my phone is now another appendage. Ha. Keep writing you are wonderful.

Amiti
apassino@cfl.rr.com
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From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2010
Usually I will not read a story until it is completed - - I've started stories before, gotten interested and then they have not been completed This story is interesting and well written, please be sure to complete it, not only for your readers, but for yourself

Thank you for the story

arashi odoriko
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From ANON - Kotori-sama on February 17, 2010
First, thank you so very much for a delightful read. I must say it was rather difficult to stop reading once I started and from beginning to end I greatly enjoyed reading each chapter for this particular fanfiction of yours. I thought it was quite creative and one of the more unique stories here for the Inuyasha world of fiction. I do so like to see author's thinking outside the box when it comes to plot, which you did very well in a way that made me want to read more. I certainly look forward to where you next decide to take your story. I also thought that each of Sesshomaru's son were very adorable and an endearing addition to Kagome's ever growing family. Second, your writing was exceedingly well done. It's was so nice to read a story that just flows without pause because of poor editor skills. Everything was near perfection and it was definitely a treat to read without problems appearing. Of course, you can always continue to edit however you wish, I just believe, in my opinion, that it's at that editing level where you can enjoy the story without issue. Very well done indeed. Third, although I noticed you haven't updated your story since 08 you still continue to write, did you by chance lose interest in this story? If so that's a shame, it has so much potential. And not that it's my place to say on what you should or shouldn't write, I just thought to ask if you would per chance decide to continue one day? I sincerely hope so. If not, I still enjoyed reading it all the same. Finally, I think your a very talented writer and I'm looking forward to reading some of your other work.

-Kotori-sama
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From DLB on October 01, 2009
ah... to be Kags!
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From LadyRed7 on September 20, 2009
Wow, I just finished reading almost all your stories. I love your style of writing. This story I remember reading some time ago. I'm sad to see that you haven't updated it. I really like it.
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From shawnawaun on September 14, 2009
this is a great story hope you finish it thank you
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From VeritasGirl on September 09, 2009
I just want to say that I have read almost every one of your Sesshomaru/Kagome pairings. This is by far the BEST fanfic featuring this couple that I have ever read. I really loved "The Syndrome" as well. I am eagerly awaiting new chapters to both, and I would just like to say that you are an amazing writer. I hope that all of the things that have been troubling you in RL settle down soon, know that your gifted storytelling is missed!

5 out of 5 stars for you!

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