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Reviews for In the Mountains

By : Goldeneyesofinu
  • From WTW on December 17, 2007
    Wow! What a nice paced story. I love the details and the plot. Thank you for giving us readers a second chapter so very soon. That was kind of you.

    Please keep up the great work!!! I can't wait till you get the next one out. I wonder how many chapters long this will be.


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  • From ANON - akdreamer on December 17, 2007
    Awesome start to a great story I look forward to your continued chapters....
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  • From ANON - countrygirl0118 on December 17, 2007
    i really like it! when is the next chapter?
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  • From LadyCash on December 16, 2007
    Very nice, Becca!
    Good characterization, and I really like
    that they both seem more mature, less
    fighting (even if it is b/c of K's restraint).
    Nice to see no 'osuwari's' too. And no
    whining, crying Kagome. This definatley
    has promise, and I will be watching!
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  • From kookookitty on December 16, 2007
    i love the little 'training' she does with yasha. i liked in the manga where she doesn't slam him so much. this chapter reminds me of a really old movie ~if a man answers~ starring sandra dee and bobby darin, the girl marries and seems to be having difficulties until her mother helps the poor girl out with her own secret to marital bliss... a dog training manual. it's a sweet movie.

    this is captivating, entertaining, humorous and well written, i will be eagerly anticipating more.

    thank you,
    ginny


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  • From DannyGirl9999 on December 15, 2007
    Chapter one is good. can't wait till chapter 2.
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