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Reviews for Betrothal of the Warrior Hime

By : sugar0o
  • From ANON - laura on December 17, 2014
    there needs to be more to this story please tell me there are more chapters to come i am so curious to see what else happens please tell me there are more chapters or at least a sequel to this story.
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  • From lara5170 on July 04, 2014
    I just read this story & I'm not sure if this was the 1st time I read it. I really enjoyed it but I don't understand the last chapter. The story doesn't seem complete because Raidan never took the pendant off of Kagome like he said he'd do as soon as she was done fighting Sessh. There also wasn't any mention of the ball or what would happen at it. I'm also curious about Naraku's plans & how he had the right to just take over as the new Lord of the North. It would seem that he shouldn't have had the right to do it because it was Kagome (& the West) who basically took out the old Lord (his family). I can't help wondering if it would be up to the 3 remaining Lords to choose who'd take over the North as the new Lord or if it was up to Sessh's dad (or, if Kagome had some say in it?)? I'm very confused about Sessh's mom & Sessh, both being related to Tsukiyomi (the Kami of the Moon) because in this story it mentioned that after Raidan had procreated with immortals, that it was no longer allowed. There are just so many questions I have that my mind is spinning. I was also looking forward to all the females getting together, only to find that they'd all become pregnant & read about their reactions. This was a great story & if it's not complete then I will hope & pray that it will be continued. Thanks for such a great story.
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  • From YunaNeko on March 30, 2011
    Wonderful. Love It. Can't Wait For Next Chapter. UPDATE SOON! GAMBATTE NE:D

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 19, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 14, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Kagomelives on December 25, 2008
    *dusts the cob webs of my comp* this is a pleasant surprise on my first day back to the site.. I'm sorry thongs have yet to pan out with your guy but I wish the best..the chap was enticingly good as always
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  • From najdan999 on October 02, 2008
    NO! i read it all... dam i hate reading it all because there is nothing more to read of it yet. Anyways it was a great story, I like how you made Kagome powerful and headstrong. Keep on writing and update soon, I need more good story to read!!!!
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  • From IntegraHellsing on September 22, 2008
    Wow!!! Alsome Chapter!!! It was worth the wait!
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  • From Noacat on September 20, 2008
    Just a quick FYI. In your description you spelled heroine wrong. Heroin is a drug. Heroine is a female hero. Thought you ought to know!
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  • From SharaeNightWalker on September 19, 2008
    *bouncebounce* write more!!! please please please! (No, i promise i'm not on a sugar high, just excited you updated)
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  • From Ashati on June 13, 2008
    OMG that is one of the best storys i have read you had me running from my computer every sexual incounter please please keep it up i'll be utterly devastated if u dont your a wonderful writter keep it up
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  • From IntegraHellsing on May 23, 2008
    ^-^ Thank you for the update!! The battle was ALSOME. The chapters never disppoint.they only get better. Cant wait for the next update!
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  • From SharaeNightWalker on May 22, 2008
    love this story. gonna kill for the cliffie but....write again soon!!!! please??? i'll send cookies!!!
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  • From Kagomelives on May 22, 2008
    excellent detail in the battle...though you know i want more I'm am pleased you broke it up between the fight and the mating though what a cliffy..Souta reborn!!?? but wait how and why? such a teaser you are
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  • From Kagomelives on May 17, 2008
    Wow so great... I had to update my story before coming back to yours ...so that you would not call me lazy ;p i need them to get the fight on and release the sexual fustration that they are forging even within me . lol i love you mind ... you must know this lol i love the development of this story though my busy mind races with antiscipation.
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