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Reviews for It Takes Two

By : Xagzan
  • From Obsession1988 on January 27, 2008
    Oh yeah I almost forgot. I'm glad that I was of some help in giving you new ideas. If you ever have the need for more inspiration I'd be happy to help, just send me an e-mail.
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  • From Obsession1988 on January 27, 2008
    I have to say, the way you added to the InuYasha/Sango section was very inventive. It has a much better length now in total, and you did a great job of portraying the full moon scene with Sango. The entire chapter was very well put together, and I'm expecting that the next chapter should be very eventful because of how this one was ended.
    On another note, I am really enjoying your story so far and will be looking forward to more chapters (though I don't see why you think you can only get about 3 more chapters in). Furthermore, because of how well this story is turning out, anything you post I will be sure to read and review. (I'm also glad that you are another author who hates Koga, be sure to kill him or mame him in one of your fics)
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  • From Xagzan on January 25, 2008
    Obssession, you read my mind on some of those points. I won't say which of course. On another point though, I think you may have given me a new idea to use, so I thank you. All I can do now is keep writing C.8 and sees where the flow takes me.

    And yes, I think I might add to the Inu/San lemon later on, so there's a chance of that. Oh, and I'm pretty sure I did have a scene where Sango told Inuyasha she and Kagome were mates, but I think I'll improve his reaction.
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  • From Obsession1988 on January 25, 2008
    Overall it's a very well put together story in my personal opinion. It seems as though you actually put some thought into your story before writing it down, making it so that this fanfic is not just thrown together haphazardly. I liked how you explained the reason for InuYasha needing more than one mate in that his youkai is demanding of it. About your comment on trying to make Kagome and Sango "different" in their love making, you did a fairly decent job at doing just that. However, I believe that the portion of the fanfic with InuYasha/Sango was a little too short. I can't wait to see how you introduce InuYasha to the fact that Kagome and Sango are also lovers.
    I'm not too sure as to what you have planned for th future chapters, but I believe it would be interesting to see what would happen if Miroku decided that he made a mistake and came back only to find Sango pregnant with InuYasha's pup. Just for a little more amusement, it would also be nice to see Koga beaten to a bloody pulp for trying to challenge InuYasha for Kagome (I hate that fucker). Another thing you could add to the story is Sango having to deal with a lust driven InuYasha during the full moon (partly because Kagome could have gone back to her time to take a test), and then Kagome getting to experiance a more passionate "human" InuYasha during the new moon.
    Whatever you decide to do it's coming along great so far, and I can't wait for the next update.
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  • From LadyCash on January 21, 2008
    Well, LadyCash has finally dragged her lazy self over to review.
    This is good. Has good characterization, pacing, tension.
    Fun to read, and leaves you with enough questions to bring you
    back. Well done, looking forward to more!
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  • From weyrdkat on January 20, 2008
    Xag,

    Been lurking for a while and decided to stop and leave a congrazzles on the fine story you've got going here. Fluffy, but non-fattening and delicious with just enough lemon to make it stick.

    Awesome.
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  • From wudelfin on January 20, 2008
    an interesting twist and ice prick give advise...nice
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  • From vdonaldson on January 14, 2008
    Nice work on this story!
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  • From Xagzan on January 13, 2008
    Thanks for the comments, keep em coming! I'm not sure how many chapters this will end up having, but it will be at least a few more.
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  • From on January 12, 2008
    hope you can update soon
    great story so far :)
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