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By : SunsetMiko
  • From ANON - Molly on April 10, 2008
    GAAAAA!!! I hate inuyasha right now...he's being a big baby! Lol ok I really like the story its amazing!! Keep up the amazing job
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 09, 2008
    WOW AWSOME!!!!!!Gotta Write more!!! I love how you did Inyasha dong the fake victim with Sessys provocted attack!~
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  • From sparkysrath on April 09, 2008
    Hey,

    I really like your stories. They are really good, I was also wondering when you were going to update she who the prophecy fortold. That is one of my altime favorites! I love that story. well i hope that you update soon and that all things are well.

    I.S.
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  • From SweatyCup on April 09, 2008
    Awwwwwww,poor Sesshy!!
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  • From ANON - brit chickie on April 09, 2008
    thank you for writing this story its fantastic, i love it, can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Evaesis on April 09, 2008
    I am loving this story, it is my favorite on this site and I look forward to new chapters everyday. Poor Sesshomaru, Inu Yasha was never my favortie and I hate what he is trying to do. Perhaps Sesshomaru should just leave for awhile and maybe get sent to the pound lol. That way Kagome might suffer for him not being around and go to find him.

    Either way I hope Inu Yasha gets what is coming to him for being a big ass.
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  • From ANON - Raistlin on April 09, 2008
    InuYasha behaves like an ass. Yes, maybe Sesshoumaru didnīt treat him right, but does he deserve to die because of that? How could he be so cruel to his half brother? Even if he doesnīt like him they are family.
    And Kagome isnīt that forgiving or tolerant. Not to Sesshoumaru. She isnīt even interested in his version of the story.
    I hope that he will get a chance to redeem himself. It isnīt fair.
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  • From debEdoo on April 09, 2008
    Poor Sesshomaru...every time he feels pain, we feel it. Every time he whimpers, we all "aww" together! It's the way you write that makes us feel for that poor dog demon. Sure, we all want to see him get the girl, but I love how you're taking your time, coaxing the others' stories into it as well, so we get a better feel of Kagome and how she is with her guy buddies!

    Thanks for an awesome update, and as always, I look forward to the next one.
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  • From ANON - CLW on April 08, 2008
    Listen, there are a few things I have to say. I've been reading this story for a while now and you're a fantastic writer. I've really enjoyed this story, but there is one thing that's really starting to piss me off: it seems like you're not taking this story anywhere. Every time Sesshomaru takes one step forward, he takes two steps back in the process, when it's not even his fault. For me, it's making Kagome out to look like a bitch since she never even attempts to understand the situations Sess gets himself into. She just automatically takes Inu's side every time, without even asking what happened. I'm starting to hate Kagome because of it, which I'm sure is not your intention. I'm also starting to hate her friends, who won't even tell her the truth about the situation, like when Inu provoked Sess into biting his arm. I'm starting to think you're making it ridiculously hard for Sess just so you can have an extremely long story, that so far does not need to be told in over twenty chapters. The story doesn't seem to be going anywhere at all, and I'm getting fed up with it. If all you give is drama, drama, drama, and no results, how am I supposed to stay engaged in the plot? The whole story is about how Sess needs to get his relationship with Kag up and running, but all you've done the entire time is make their relationship worse. I started reading this story, hoping I would see the relationship with Kag and Sess develop, but nothing's happened, and it's been over twenty chapters already. Am I supposed to wait another twenty chapters for them to even have a somewhat civil conversation? I had hoped that now that Sess's beast has come into the picture, I would start to see at least something develop, but you destroyed that by him biting Inu's arm, which just makes me despise Inu and his friends. I really loved this story at the beginning, but now it's just making me angry and making me hate everyone (including Kags) except Sess. I hope you start to take the plot somewhere else besides: Sess tries to get Kag to like him, Kag begins to like him, Inu fucks it all up and makes it worse for Sess, repeat cycle. I'm sorry to be saying this. You can yell at me in your next AN, and other readers can disagree and bash me in their reviews, but it's just what I feel.
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  • From ANON - Isa383 on April 08, 2008
    That's no fair...Inuyasha interferred after his father said not to...There should be consequences on his part. I'm hating Inuyasha now...He needs to get over it. The other three should have told her Inuyasha was baiting him. With those three, they are never going to let anything happen between Kagome and Sesho. I wanted to cry for him. Please let things get better between Sesho and Kagome real soon. I'm getting tired of Inuyasha real quick.
    Oh yeah...LOVED THE CHAPTER UPDATE...Your creativity is why I love your stories so much. You are great!
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  • From ANON - Emily on April 08, 2008
    Ohhhhh I absolutely LOVE your work! I just can't wait for the next chapter....I'm anxious to see how long you can continue the tension between Kagome, Sesshomaru, and Inuyasha and how you resolve it. Keep it up, you have me on the edge of my seat!
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  • From lovelessjayson on April 08, 2008
    WHAT CHAPTER 24 IS NOT WRITTEN....~faints all drama-like and gets up~ Ok I am over it, update sooon please I want to see what happens please please....
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  • From ANON - ashleekyle on April 08, 2008
    oh my gosh, oh my gosh! Lime, i love it. Oh what an awesome chapter. Dang, Inuyasha I am going to kill him. This has to be one of the most amazing stories I have read in a long time. plz keep the chapters coming. and the boys are being really selfish right now, but you know the old saying change meets resistance. thanks for all the effort and time you put into this fic.
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  • From rowdygirl on April 08, 2008
    Girl, write this any way you please, post it any way you can, just keep writing. If you quit, I'll have to go cold turkey to break my addiction and that won't be pretty.

    Jane
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  • From Rinseternalsoul on April 08, 2008
    I'm doing a happy dance over this speedy update! Man, Inuyasha was certainly devious in turning Kagome further against Sesshomaru. Not that he didn't deserve it for the years of abuse toward Inuyasha, but I felt sorry for him. Just when he was making headway, Inuyasha set them back again. The lime content was steamy and sweet. Loved when Kagome told him to quit talking like a sixteenth century poet and just kiss her. lol! I was thinking the same thing myself since good ol' Sess was laying it on a little thick. haha! Great job, but that is nothing unusual. And congrats on your awards! You sooo deserve them.

    ~Rin
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