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Reviews for The Syndrome

By : SunsetMiko
  • From ANON - just me :) on April 07, 2008
    I love your story! All of it :) thank you for updating, especially since you update FAR more often then most of the other good writers on this site. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
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  • From Rinseternalsoul on April 07, 2008
    I think that I might love this chapter more than any other so far! Oh wow, the vampire image was perfect for Sesshomaru and he actually got to spend some time with Kagome. It was so sweet! I also loved how the guys tried to run him off, but Kagome didn't let them. Too bad he was so sure she would have turned her back on him if she knew who he really was. Personally, I think he missed the perfect opportunity to tell her how he felt. But hey, then we wouldn't have this story, would we? lol! As for your issues with certain reviewers, well, just ignore them as best you can. This IS a great story, and I love the way you have it set up - going back into the past in one chapter and then to the future in the next. It is a refreshing difference and allows us to feel closer to the characters as we understand their stories and connection to Kagome and Sesshomaru. In fact, I had even recommended the story to my beta, Risa, FOR that exact reason. People that fuss about it are just being impatient and childish. It is what makes the story unique and I am glad that you are sticking to your guns. As for the updating...HA! You update faster than most people. WAY faster than me. My chapters are longer, but I am writing a completely different kind of story than this one. Personally, I think the chapters are a very nice length for this type of story. When I see an update, I find myself thinking back to the previous chapter and whether it took place in the past or future. This week I was like... 'okay, this one will take place in the past! Let's see what Kagome and the guys were up to.' It makes it kind of fun. Anyway, I'm just jabbering on. Sorry. I really do enjoy your story and look forward to the updates. You certainly deserve any of the nominations that you have been chosen for. Good luck with them. Thanks for the read!

    ~Rin
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  • From sutlesarcasm on April 07, 2008
    I love the past chapters too, like you said, they add color and background, and they're as fun to read as you said they are to write. Don't stop, I'm following this story closely both on AFF and MM. (I think it's MM) Boy, Inu sure is pissy about this, can't say I blame him, Sess does treat him like shit, so I can't say that Sess doesn't deserve the tongue lashing Kagome gave him. As much as I love Inu, and I do love him first and best, Sess is just SSSSSSSOOOOOO HHHHOOOOOOOOOTTTTTT. If only he had those ears, but then, if he had those ears, alot of people would be in serious trouble. Maybe it's a good thing these two are Anime. If they were real, It would be Troy All Over Again.

    Sutlesarcasm
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  • From deceit on April 07, 2008
    this is an absolutly wonderful story dont stop writing! ^,^
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  • From Tricia1224 on April 06, 2008
    Congrats on all your nominations ans awards. That definitely says something about you as a writer. Personally, I enjoy the past chapters. This story would not be the same without them. It adds to the understanding of the characters. Keep up the great work. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kristin mcvey on April 06, 2008
    i really like your story the syndrome and i think the past chapter are cool.although if you dont mind me saying so i think it would be nice also if sesshoumaru didnt suffer so much in it.but its your story and its a cool one.thanks for writing it and i hope you dont over do yourself to much,then you wouldnt be able to write these cool stories.
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  • From ANON - Legilmyth on April 06, 2008
    Another excelent chapter. I am really enjoying how you have alternated between the past and the present. Its kind of nice to know in advance what part of the story we will be hearing next. I look forward to your next instalment as always. And congrats on your 2nd place.
    Until next time.
    Legilmyth
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  • From SweatyCup on April 06, 2008
    WOOOOOOOO!Loving it!!!
    First I wanna say that well he ,even as desprite as he is,deciled Kikiyo,heheh.
    Second its so sad that he is soooooo....soooo...ummm how do you say...um alone and screwed,royaly screwed.
    And third I never knew they got THAT close to each other before,I was like 'OOOWWEE' and when he 'grazed' her thoat with this fangs and licked her I was like 'all right!'.I just love this story !!Hope you write more soon!!
    Love Always^
    ^Dei Dei
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  • From oneswish on April 06, 2008
    some people are dumb! the past chapters give such insight to the story, it makes u understand ur point of view.. gah!! i would be pulling my hair out if i saw those. but they can just suck eggs for all i care.. this chapter was to wonderfully done, thanks for sess as a vampire.. lol!! it will be in my head for weeks now. i love were ur taking this story.. and u update quite often so dont listen to the stingy people out there that only want ur blood and sweat.. cause well ur great. ur story is awesome and it makes u happy. i loved this past chapter was all about sess pov, it was cool. u grabbed highschool drama to a t! so keep up with the greatness, and i can wait. cause i know if u rush it nothing but CRAP! soo no crap! ok?

    ThankYOU!!
    higan
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  • From ANON - Monkey 82 on April 06, 2008
    I love this story. I also love all the details that you have put into it. What i really like is the back story. Not many people write it like you do. I check each day for an update. If i don't have one, i am sad, but when i do see one it is the first thing that i will sit and read. You attention to detail is great. Who really cares if other people say they don't like the other chapters or that they are not long enough. I like it and for me that is all the matters.

    I really don't write that many reviews. I really save them for stories that i like and can't wait for the update. Your's is one of them for me. Keep up all the great work. I look forward to read the next chapters..


    :)
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  • From ANON - saatchi on April 06, 2008
    hey, your story is awesome! don't let anyone tell you you don't update enough; 10 pages twice a week is a lot. i like the angst and character development, and how you're jumping from past to present back to past with each new chapter. can't wait to see how this turns out! thank you for writing. :)
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  • From ANON - pauly on April 03, 2008
    Hi, I am new at this reviewing thing. I'm from Ecuador Southamerica, therefore my english is rather bad, but let me tell you, your stories are fabolous. And since my grammar and spelling are terrible I'm just going to say YOU ARE A GREAT WRITTER, and your stories are awesome. (Hopefully I wrote everything ok, and you could understand what I'm trying to say.) Bye
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  • From ANON - Stas on April 02, 2008
    Yay! That made my day.
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  • From Rinseternalsoul on April 01, 2008
    YAY! I was so hoping for soft doggy snuggles. This is the perfect opportunity for Sesshomaru to endear himself to Kagome without his usual stigma standing in the way. Kagome has got to be close to figuring it out now. I mean, if it isn't a demoness, then duh, it has to be a human. And how many humans does Sesshomaru hang out with? Only one girlfriend! Woohoo! Won't she be surprised. haha! As always, great chapter!

    ~Rin
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  • From SweatyCup on March 31, 2008
    I just love this story! This chapter was sooo....on the edge,I dont know.But its like going 2 steps foward and 1 step back .Getting there but slowly .I like that about it.Write more please!!
    Love Always^
    ^Dei Dei
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