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Reviews for Captivity

By : Keija819
  • From sugar0o on March 11, 2008
    again i think i reviewed this chapter but maybe i didn't since its letting me... either way i wonder why he's so utterly vain but then i have an odd feeling that this whole mirror thing, and getting Kags to submit in such an odd way is like demon courting. I'm sure he can't really go abotu normal demon courting with someone like Kagome. AS much as most authors just having her willingly being weak and only having random bouts of heroine wisdom, i think she's a lot stronger then most authors give her credit for. She's fiery, she's rambunctious, she's completely and utterly unpredictable, and she's got a temper. I've always said i was surprised that she didn't ever just kill Inu with those Sits in the anime and the manga. either way i'm still completely interested in this story and cannot wait for the next update. please do so soon, i want to see what kinda crazy Sess has in store for her now.

    Just a ps.
    I always wanted to write a fic with Kags finding Kikyo and INu in the woods, her running off only to stop dead in her tracks and go back and lands like a flying spinning kick into Kikyo's face... I s0o0o0o know thats mean but i cant help it, have you any idea how many have her see, run, cry, bump into demon lord... etc etc, sex, love, preggers. i think its bleh and this story has none of that, you even told us he's gunna give her back willingly. makes ya wonder what he's gunna do between now and then. and what she's gunna do the next time she see him in the F.Era O_O write that!
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  • From marcia on February 02, 2008
    I'm interested to find out where this is going. If she goes back in time and finds the younger Sess she'll still have to obey him right? That could be interesting. Wonder if she even gets back to the past. Well it's bookmarked I'll just have to check back in later huh?
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  • From oneswish on February 01, 2008
    it took me an entire day to read soo far what u wrote.. its really really good.. needs some description.. but u nailed her feelings down beautifully.. the beginning is very well crafted.. im a bit confused as to why she went home for a month?? school?? family issue's?? uhh.. needed to get away and be home?? and does her family even know whats going on??

    this is the only confusing factor in the story.. i like the way u make the feelings and musing of the sessh soo critical, um very stoic and aristocratic. very him. what about inuyasha?? is he in the future too???

    man its soo many things to think about.. u really have me hooked!!

    cant wait for the next installement.
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  • From phoenix23 on January 30, 2008
    Lol, this is a fantastic story so far!! I love sess and kags together. I also love that Kags still has all that fight in her despite everything...It's great when she really annoys sess...it makes for good chemistry! Great story, can't wait for updates!! I will beg if I have to, I am quite shameless that way.
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  • From sugar0o on January 30, 2008
    hmm you've got me wondering just why he's hiding mirrors, yet oddly i find it weird that Kags hasn't thought that maybe Sess just survived the time frame from then to now. Its not like she kept it very secret just jumping in and out of the damned able well all the time, Hanyou included. so i dunno, i don't think Kags would mind all that much she's forgiving, and doesn't seem bothered by the fact that Inu's abotu 150 if you don't count his time pinned to the tree, 200 in that case. - r0o

    ps. no problem for me keeping up. ^_^
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  • From Rinseternalsoul on January 30, 2008
    This has turned out to be an intriguing story that leaves me dying to know what the whole 'plan' is about. I think that I am with Kagome on this one though, Sesshomaru is showing definite signs of kinkiness. And the mirror thing... well, that's just crazy. Maybe the past 500 years hasn't been too good to the old guy. Might be a screw loose beneath all that pretty hair. It will be interesting to see what you have planned for them in future chapters. Thanks for the read! ~Rin
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  • From DawnaSama on January 29, 2008
    See? I told you that all you need to do was stop complaining and start typeing. congradulations on your story so far. I really enjoy it. I hope to see more from you soon.


    Dawna Sama
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  • From LADYWELLES on January 29, 2008
    OMFG MORE please update
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  • From SesshysRose on January 29, 2008
    OOooooo, I have to say, this story appears to be very interesting...I can't wait to see what you do to it in further chapters! Great work...good luck on future work! :)
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  • From cowgirlkitten2000 on January 29, 2008
    i like the way its going so far. its has got a good twist to it. im looking forward to reading more soon
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  • From trinity3000 on January 29, 2008
    I like the direction of the story, even though his end plan is still quite a mystery. This Sessh seems to be a big old perv with the tube dress and the maid's outfit. Whatever will he make her wear while she is his personal servant.
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  • From sugar0o on January 29, 2008
    i actually like were this is going, the duality of being such a pure being as our litle Kagome is, being into S&M type stuff is very amusing. She's such a match to his dark composures, she's his exact opposite. its perfect, i adore this story. please keep up the wonderful world.
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  • From sugar0o on January 28, 2008
    lmao. omg i want to know what's going on s0o0o0o0o0o0o bad, why does he need her for a month? and how does it relate to his vanity? what happens when she goes back to the past, surely he has to have thought that she could go back and kill him? haha too many questions!!!!
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  • From katme on January 27, 2008
    Kat extends her index finger and pokes the author of her new favorite story in the ribs a couple of times, seeing that this is clearly not enough encouragement to make her release the next chapter she shouts "Come on! out with it already!" With a satisfied look on her face she waits quietly for a few moments before adding "And make the chapters longer too!"
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  • From Amadoni on January 27, 2008
    Well, this is getting intesting. I'm honestly not sure where you are going with this. I really would like an explanation of how she got there, he got there, and why the month is important. But I'll wait a little while longer since you're updating so fast. Keep up the good work.
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