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Reviews for Captivity

By : Keija819
  • From Crysan on February 27, 2012
    I like this story. I do hope you update soon. I am waiting with bated breath.
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  • From marcia on February 16, 2009
    I, um, forgot about this story until I saw it today. I hope you decided to update more frequently. It's always a pleasure to read it and try to figure out where you're going with it. Even if it is a hopeless task to do so.
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on February 08, 2009
    hey glad u liked my review and was happy and interested in my questions. This chapter did answer some of my thooughts and questions and it was a good chapter, I have a feeling i know who sesshoumaru's wife was and it explains alot that he mentally lost so now that explains his behaviour. Snowbird was right he is crazy, poor sesshy and although the last cliffy was something, I am so glad he didnt go through with defiling her like that. It was a good chapter cant wait to read more.

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    Scarlet
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  • From StephanieG on February 08, 2009
    Will sesshomaru really be different when he will come back? It fells like the clothes the other girl gave Kagome is more than just that...but what? Hm. Was it clothes of sess' wife?
    Gah! I can't wait to read more! please, update as soon as possible, I'm begging you!!!
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  • From Moonieh on February 07, 2009
    i have to wonder is that rape
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on February 06, 2009
    As I said alot of things confused me and when I reading your reviews I realized snowbird highlighted a bunch of them especially the dangers of time and her pride and the way she should be fighting him (but I guess he reintroduced the poision in her viens so it will be harder for her to fight at some points...case in point cliffy at the end of the chapter *still looking nervous*), so maybe these things will be explained but other than that I am a hungry person for knowledge and I cant help but agree with her. The story has an interesting storyline like I said before and I like it its me being curious as I am an analytical person. Its just thrist for these answers not a reflection on your story, hope u understand.

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    Scarlet
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on February 06, 2009
    Very interesting story, I have read all 11 chapters and I have to say Wow, and WTF, alot of things are still confusing me but I guess that it will sort itself out in the end, and the chemistry between the two of them is well written and the anomostity is present, Your sesshoumaru pisses me off but u had me on the floor with that sort of cliffy u left in chap 11, *clears throat and looks nervously over shoulder* That was hot and I cant wait to read more.


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  • From pcpalomo on October 12, 2008
    all i ask is for u to continue the story. normally i wouldn't take the time to review because we have to log in but for this story i couldn't help myself. please4 please continue the story
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  • From ohsnaptheresa on October 08, 2008
    i loved your story so far! please keep it up and if possible, could you e-mail me once you've updated? thanks in advance and keep it up!! :)
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  • From marcia on July 17, 2008
    Yay new chapters since I was last here! I'm still unsure of what he's planing but I'm looking forward to finding out.
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  • From sugar0o on July 06, 2008
    hope your doing well!
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  • From snowbird on May 21, 2008
    How can Kagome feel something for him when he is abusing her physically and mentally along with humiliating her? To me that is such a turn off. I think she is being a bit of a wimp, too. I'm not so young anymore and life has taught me to be a fighter. I guess that's why I'm so disappointed that she hasn't put up more of a resistance than she has. Sure, resistance sometimes involves pain but that's life. Where's her pride? My pride and independence has made me a fighter all my life. I have to admit that he has me totally confused. I get frustrated when I'm confused for too long. What's with his mirror fetish? I'm beginning to think that he's mentally unstable, living and thinking the way he does. One thing stood out to me. Evidently she has not reached the point in time in the past where she gave him his arm back. So why is he unconcerned that she may end up killing herself at the end of the month from whatever he has planned for her? Did he not stop to think that if she did, then his arm would disappear? Plus other things in his future may change with her not finishing her mission in the past. I guess his craziness is not letting him think logically on everything. I know you've got answers for his actions and they may turn out to be perfectly sane ones, but for now to me he's loonie and not a turn on at all. I look forward to future updates that will begin to explain his actions. As I said, I get frustrated with confusion.
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  • From L0VER on April 07, 2008
    hey! I see that many other viewers are questioning your .....motive. But i'm not one to complain, even though a lot of things are still unclear, i think the story is flowing nicely. And i'm not even going to fusterate myself in guessing what's really happening cause i'm sure you're gonna clear it up (RIGHT?!) and it'll be awesome. And Sesshomaru is so... EVIL , gosh. kissing her like that just to ...insert more poison? But I like how it's...dark , but ...pretty hot. AHA, ohhgosh. UPDATE SOOOOON :):)
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  • From sugar0o on April 07, 2008
    you tease! omg i'm completely upset right now, i want more! so much and so little at the same time, what have you done to our Sess and Kags, you've kept them delightfully in character and yet so completely OOC its amazing and bizare and fantastic, and i'm completely enthralled to levels i'm amazed by. wonderful. update! yours, - r0o
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  • From emmaren on April 02, 2008
    I like that you are bread crumbing us along on this story. It has me kind of frustrated, but at the same time that puts me in the smae perspective as the two main characters. As far as night vs day, so many possiblities to explore it is hard to choose.

    Emily
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