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Reviews for Captured and Trapped

By : StephanieG
  • From Alpine02 on March 02, 2009
    Love it.. Not sure that there are any words for how much I love reading this fic. Most fics I read with Kags/Sess are way ooc for Sess but this one is spot on and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for updating *-)
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  • From Ladylara on March 01, 2009
    I am so glad that Sesshoumaru seems to feel a little protective over Kagome. Maybe between them they can find a way to escape. Cant wait for more.

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  • From Crysan on February 28, 2009
    Just to let you know I think you are doing very well. I have only found a few mistakes and other authors also use kukuku when Naraku laughs. Also I will be bookmarking this story and checking frequently for the next update. I only do this with stories I REALLY like... If you ever get time please read my story DayDreams I have yet to go through and edit the beginning chapters to add details and I am only 2 chapters away from finishing but I would like your opinion on it as another author... keep up the good writing
    A bien tot!
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  • From ANON - Carmille on February 28, 2009
    Yeah!

    Sorry, but it is a really good chapter (15). The way our dear demon lords conflicted feelings/thoughts are delineated is simply glorious and I must say you have made dear kagome a srong fighter. She has a backbone hard as steel and that's someting I really appreciate.
    The way this fiction is slowly developing make enough room for the two characters to get to know each other on a more deep and personal level. It isn't rushed like some writers prefer so you get a much more detailed knowledge about their background.
    Just want to say I really like our writing.

    Hugs,
    Carlille
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  • From MourningRaven on February 28, 2009
    First off I would like to say that I have always wondered about the "ku ku ku" thing. Thank you for clearing it up. Second, I think that "DarkMystic" (not sure if I got that right) went a little overboard. I have noticed a few spelling errors, but I enjoy reading this story to much to stop for something so stupid. And third, you handled that reviewer flawlessly. Great job on everything! I will be looking for an update soon!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - layla_hell on February 17, 2009
    waaah! Kawaii! I so luv it! Pwease pwomise that you will update soon! Pweaty pweaty pwease? I'm addicted to your story! Sankyu for posting it! X3
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  • From Alpine02 on February 13, 2009
    Totally loved it.. I have read an awful lot out here with my very fav, Sheshy and Kags, and they all see to make him ooc.. I love that in this story of yours, that he is truly more in tune with what he should be.. Inu's older bro who is a complete hard ass... Love it and can't wait to see more.
    Thanks for the great story
    Alpine
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  • From MourningRaven on February 12, 2009
    Update Soon!
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  • From opiumdreams09 on February 11, 2009
    I love this story and the way you portray Kag/Sess. can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - puppydog on February 10, 2009
    That was a nice chapter. Please continue.
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on February 10, 2009
    Bloody good story progression, oh my this is getting so good, i love the thoughts of sesshoumaru they seem so cannon and what u would think he would do in such a situation. Poor kags, naraku has some devious plans for her, and when sesshoumaru figures it out i cant wait to see his reactions. I love your strong. chin-up kagome, she really is fighting. I love that too. keep up the great work and update soon.
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on February 10, 2009
    Im sorry to hear about the power outage, i know all too well how thats like and how boring it could be.
    Me and my bf were living in Virginia when a hurricane came and took the power out for at least 4 weeks.
    It was hell, we resorted to a bunch of things, tried to cook hot dogs on candles once... O.o you know the flame of a candle wont cook a hot dog, just make it black and bitter while still being cold...That wasn't pleasant... As for the story, somethings at first made me dislike it,
    such as the grammar and the way you word different sentences, for example in the first few sentences you would type something like

    "Sesshomaru slightly narrowed his eyes making her froze in her display.
    At the hard look the demon Lord was sending her way,
    Kagome knew that she had say something stupid…again.
    But hey, when there is someone bitten by a snake and such,
    they always said that you had to suck the poison out with your mouth.
    She was not crazy, there are proofs of what she had tell err screamed at him.
    A lot of them ! They always do that… in movies."

    I would have written.

    "Sesshoumaru narrowed his eyes making her freeze in her display,
    at the hard look the demon lord was sending her way.
    Kagome knew she had said something stupid...Again.
    But hey, when there is someone bitten by a snake and such,
    they always say you have to suck the poison out with your mouth.
    She wasnt crazy, theres proof of what she had said..er, screamed at him.
    Alot of people, they always do that... In movies."

    I found i could ignore this however if i just imagine that it was words of my choosing i was reading, instead of yours.
    But then i came to Naraku and his god awful laugh....Seriously...Who says kukuku?
    How does that laugh even go in real life?
    I mean it doesn't make him scary when hes laughing that way, why would you write kukuku,
    it makes me think hes wearing a pink dress, saying oh i feel so pretty KUKUKU!

    Besides that I rated each chapter the highest it could go because some of the story is really good, and I like it other then that god awful laugh, why cant you write *he chuckles* or something instead of kukuku? Come on! Ok im done with my rant lol.
    Good luck on the next installment.
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  • From Ladylara on February 07, 2009
    I am glad that Sesshoumaru finally decided to help her with her nightmare. I hope they find a way to get out soon. Nice chapter. Cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Oniumi on February 06, 2009
    I love your story!! :D

    You kept Sesshomaru and the other InuYasha cast in such good character, it's easy to see that happening in the actual series! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - kikyoslovergirl on February 06, 2009
    wow. lol odd but cute chappy
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