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Reviews for Time goes by; Life goes on

By : kirarakat55
  • From ShouraiChan on February 11, 2008
    Love it. It made me cry with chapter two and here I am thinking, "OH GOD! Not another Inuyasha-dead, Kagome-single mom" thing. Talk about a breath of fresh air, lol. But either way, this story is really amazing. Poor Kagome, having only two months until delivery....I'd be scared out of my wit! Anyway, great job! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - LALA on February 10, 2008
    Oh now, I understand...I should have figured out that the rate of the pregnancy will be shorter since she is carrying a 1/4 youkai. I guess I should of waited for the next chapter to come out...Sorry...But it is a good story. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Danny Girl on February 10, 2008
    Chapter 2 was great keep up the great work. Can't
    wait till chapter 3.
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  • From ANON - Ryu on February 10, 2008
    Very Good.

    Seems that you plan to bring them back together.

    But instead of Inu Yasha living so long that he is in her time, you make it so, that Inu Yasha have to find a way to bring the Well back to work.

    At least it seems so so far.

    Keep up your good work. I'm eager to read more and if Inu Yasha make it in time to witness his son's birth. ^^

    Otherwise it would make a big surprise for him when she comes back and he has to face his child.
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  • From ANON - LALA on February 10, 2008
    Nice story but about the pregnancy thing....that is all wrong. You can tell the sex of the baby at the third month...it is usally determined by the end of the fourth month or the fifth month itself when more developement of the child. And if you have the baby planing to kick it wony usually kick until the 6th month or on because the baby is starting to move its entire body to get ready for birth. Just to let you know because I was a pregnant mom and that is all wrong.
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  • From ANON - Danny Girl on February 09, 2008
    I like this your beginning. Please update soon.
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