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By : 66Hiei08
  • From Antarprince04 on March 11, 2008
    Well, I rather enjoyed that. I don't generally read fics that are in Script format, but I rather liked that. I'll be honest; I had a minor issue with you calling Inuyasha Mother. This is a very common issue in Mpreg sadly, but there are a Million other terms that can be used in it's place. The simplest of these is Daddy... Where as Seshomaru is the Father, you could call inuyasha Daddy, or Barrer, or any other word - not neccessarily English or Japanese, but any word that means Father... Assigning gender roles in Mpreg is one of the things that turn alot of people off to Mpreg. An Author has to remember that even though we have a Male being appointed to a Female biological task that we are still dealing with 2 Males. Therefore, we should avoid making them act TOO feminine.

    Still; as I stated, I very much enjoyed this story and I do indeed think that you should do a Sequel. I'm Very interested in seeing the pups grow up and evolving as Characters - establishing thier Rank, as Sesshomaru put it. Maybe Kagome finding a way back, especially if she has the last piece of the Shikon No Tama. After all; while the part of the well that is above ground was destroyed, the well itself is simply a Hole in the ground. It's power actually comes from the God-Tree, which is again, rooted in the ground. Naraku did not destroy the Tree, so it is Possible for Kagome to return.

    It's obvious as well that she had a lot of issue with the Inucest. Given the Modern stigma this is ofcourse not surprising, but you could use a Sequel to explore all these angles and Many more as well. Plus, on a Selfish note, I AM sort of a Kouga fan and you did set that up Excellently for the possibility of a threesome hee

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  • From nchsmi on March 10, 2008
    Great job! I was so happy that Sesshomaru called Shippo 'the newest member of their family'. I also liked that they decided to let Shippo believe that most of what had happened to him was 'a horrible nightmare'. It should give the poor thing some peace of mind! So, the jewel went to Kagome, huh? Maybe, that could be the focus for the sequel. A new problem could arise with Kagome surrounding the jewel. She may need to return, to be rid of the jewel once and for all! Maybe, Kagome could still have some underlined resentment towards InuYasha and Sesshomaru, over being dumped for Sesshomaru. I would also love to see how the children turned out. How they looked in their 'humanoid' form. Especially, Kuromaru. I would think he would look like InuYasha and his late grandmother, Izayoi! Again great job! B reading U (soon)!

    L8r!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2008
    sorry for not being clear in my other review. i'll try to do better, now.

    the more dialogue there is in a story, or script, the more the emotionality is relegated to whoever is doing the speaking to convey. as there is no true speaker at this point, the emotionality is up to the reader to put in, instead of the writer.

    i guess my mind is not creative emough to put a lot of my own emotion into the words.

    i really did like your story, and i thank you for sharing it with all of us.


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  • From wolfluv on March 10, 2008
    You've made a truly great and beautiful story and should pat yourself on the back for story well done! I would love to see a sequel but as it stands it's up to you and your muse! THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS STORY WITH ALL OF US AND WE LOOK FORWARD TO WHAT YOU WILL COME OUT WITH NEXT!
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  • From midnightsweet on March 10, 2008
    very sweet endding. i'll keep an eye out for what you do next. enjoyed this very much.
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  • From Afrieal on March 10, 2008
    **clapping enthusiasticly** thank you for such a wonderful story. If we might be so bold as to sugguest maybe a small scene where Kagome gets the jewel and dreams of the happy things that go on with her friends? or at least the reason she has it back?

    Affie and Rysh
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  • From mls on March 10, 2008
    loved the whole story!!! i'll be watching for any more of your stories!!!!
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  • From nchsmi on March 09, 2008
    A sequel? Oh hell YES!!!!!!! Please do a sequel. It would be wonderful to see how the family grows! Plus, what happens to little Shippo! I want to see how InuYasha and Sesshomaru brings him into the fold. And don't forget those cute little puppies, and their big sister, Rin. What will Sesshomaru decide about Tatigami's family? Will Pur and the rest of the cat tribe keep there word, and offer their loyalty to the Inus? Or will they become the new enemy? But, of course, it up to you! B reading U!

    L8r!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 09, 2008
    i have to admit, this format didn't seem appealing when i first found this story. but after i started reading, i found i liked it. it keeps the story moving at a quick pace without seeming rushed.

    the only problem i have with it now, is that it doesn't lend itself well to emotional development. the motivational factors for the character's actions are sometimes lost.

    but i do think it deserves a sequel. i would like to see what life in the castle will all of them would be like.


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  • From midnightsweet on March 09, 2008
    i'm not sure about a squel because something bad always happens. maybe you should do another story about the two of them. like all the twist and turns happens before they get there happen endding.
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  • From solitare1 on March 09, 2008
    Now you know what I want!!! I like the sequels you did for YYH so you know I want a SEQUEL!
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  • From 1127 on March 09, 2008
    Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story. I do hope that you continue. Your writing style just makes the story flow. After reading this one I have now also read your others and found them all to be just as well written and enjoyable. Please, do keep up the great work. You do have a gift of words.
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  • From mls on March 09, 2008
    love the new scene!!!it doesn't matter to me which you do, i'll read it either way!! do what you feel like doing. keep up the great work!!!!!!!
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  • From calenloke on March 09, 2008
    Oh I love it! please please let there be a sequel, please please. Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha in this story is so hot! and Kawaii! lol. please please have a sequel. I just love this story.
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  • From Afrieal on March 09, 2008
    We vote for both if you're willing you've got talent to spare and Af thinks you should write for Manga or Anime I think you could do books with no problem please continue to share with us.

    Ryshandra and Afrieal
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