Reviews for The True PurposeBy : 66Hiei08 |
Oh that is SO messed UP!!! Poor Sesshomaru!!! Inuyasha will HAVE to know SOMETHING is UP though when he has a look at his own chest!!!
Oooh yea! Definitely! I call it the "Muse Mega Move" it's when your Muse takes the story from you. You become the "translator" if you struggle against the muse the gigadrain zaps your energy! It is kind of difficult to let go and allow her to "do her thing" if one doesn't believe in her exististince enough to submit! Oh and Plot up coming... That "HEALER" I have a feeling Sess should be a bit more cautious about TRUSTING his life to whom? Hopefully not that bitch
Oooh it is happening!!! Writer I just need to say... This is thee SEXIEST plot WITH porn fic I have ever read!!! I've read a LOT! Your sexual subtleties are so seductive, smooth, and sneaky... You have a talent for causing a raging blaze of hormones to drive a person mad before they even realize it started!!! That is sooo hot!
Hot DAYUM!!! SAVE some hose water for meeee!!! Happy Valentine's day DAMN IT! It was SOOOO nice I had to read this chapter TWICE I am NOT joking!!! KAMI-SAMA THANK YOU!
I've tried to save my review until it's a bit closer to the end, but this chapter is very confusing to me! I do not get a few things and sincerely hope you can or will explain. 1st the what I thought was an intimate scene turned...??? What Violent?? Left "Sub Inuyasha" mumbling??? Muffled?? In the bed just because Sessh said "Don't move!" how??? WHY? It says he was on his back. So he wasn't smothering??? What HAPPENED there??? This story is very good so I am very engrossed in every detail! So I hope you are still around to assist me in understanding where you are going with the scene here! Next this sentence baffeled me badly! " Sesshomaru feels his first reaction to this gesture, preening." I mean... Preening is a maintenance behaviour found in birds that involves the use of the bill to position feathers... So what is creation is Sessh doing or feeling here exactly?? Very confusing. Please help me understand!! Thank you!
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