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Reviews for The Deal, The Make Over, The Boyfriend?

By : TheDisasterousChibi
  • From sysclp on August 24, 2008
    I don't usually read high school stories, but I liked your other one so decided to try it. So far it is cute and funny (read first 6 chapters), and I will keep reading to see where it goes. You may want to edit chapter 6 though. All the punctuation marks came out as weird looking special characters making it hard to read.

    Thanks!

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 11, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

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  • From ANON - MirumotoTsubasa on May 10, 2008
    I like the story! It is a testament to the quality of the tale that, despite my inner grammar nazi screaming in fits, I keep reading. *grin*

    One thing you might look into, it seems the formatting got messed up a bunch on this one, and possibly some other chapters. The quotes and such were all out of whack. It's still possible to read it, but highly distracting.

    Hmm...I think this will be my second review ever. Congrats and keep writing! :)
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  • From Silent Pluto on May 08, 2008
    hehe so the plot thickens
    i'm liking this story
    update soon okay?
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  • From ANON - andy on May 06, 2008
    I absolutely love this story! You have a real talent for writing. So please keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Kat on May 05, 2008
    Well I must say that I do enjoy reading this story. It is one of the few stories that I get all hyped up about when I notice that they've been updated.

    Please keep up the good work!

    Kat.
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  • From Panchat on May 05, 2008
    perhaps you should rework this chapter, the lay out and the words are wrong. not sure if it's from your word or if it's Aff.net that messed it up o.0
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  • From Noacat on May 04, 2008
    Just an FYI -- seems something goofy happened with the formatting in this chapter. Looks like some kind of encoding error where your quotation marks aren't showing correctly.
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  • From Sherwii4602 on May 04, 2008
    prertty good story except i skimmed though everything when i get a chance i'll read the whole thing, what grade are they in?
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  • From SharaeNightWalker on May 04, 2008
    i am loving this story. please update soon???
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  • From loretta537 on April 25, 2008
    this is such a great story! my only problem is why does sess need glasses or contacts? shouldnt his youkai healing abilities fix any eye problems? and even if it doesnt why wouldnt he get laser eye surgery so that nobody would know he needed glasses as poor sight is a weakness.
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  • From KagomeCowgirl007 on March 31, 2008
    i love this story. its so cute. i hope you update soon... can you contact me if/when you do?
    much love
    ~~**laura**~~
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  • From missnykoongawa on March 04, 2008
    The story is getting better.
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  • From ANON - Kitty on February 26, 2008
    Continue or I kill! LOL JK but really please continue. ^_^
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  • From ANON - krystal on February 25, 2008
    Hay listen don't let flammers get you down! There is a 1000+stories out there if they have a problem with yours maybe they should mossie on along lmao!!!It is your story write it how you see it! I PERSONALLY LIKE IT!
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