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By : emmaren
  • From sugar0o on April 16, 2008
    i must tell you i love reading your story so much, i find its over far too fast, that i've enjoyed my chapter and now i have to wait, its lovely and slightly maddening, and yet the small bits, the little jokes, the imagery really makes the wait worth it. "she should have melted, at least the flying monkeys would have been happy..." hilarious! again so worth it, cant wait for the next, - r0o
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  • From Rinseternalsoul on April 15, 2008
    Nice chapter! Kagome is finally relaxing around Sesshomaru and he is finally seeing a step beyond his arrogance thanks to Inuyasha. I think this trip into the wilderness will prove interesting for them both. I look forward to seeing what you have cooked up for Oda Nobunaga. He is also a key character in my story Violation of Honor. I found a great site that you can reference - if you are interested. It has dozens of links to different facts related to Nobunaga and his reign. I found it very interesting. Especially discovering that the man was supposedly very handsome, though quite short. He hated his wife and loved a concubine. He was a brilliant strategist, but considered cruel. Anyway, here is the link: http://uk.geocities.com/rainforestwind/oda14.htm#catholic

    Thanks for the update!
    ~Rin
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2008
    Great Chapter and a Beautiful ending to it as well. I love the transition in this story, every chapter has a purpose and a meaning. You have definitely thought this story through and I wait in anticipation to read your next chapter. Great Work, Please update soon...well as soon as you can.
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  • From Rinseternalsoul on April 15, 2008
    I have been reading your story and I really am enjoying it very much. I have been out of touch for a short while and was tickled to see that you had updated several chapters since I read last. I have just spent a couple of really pleasurable hours catching up, so thank you! I read that some of your readers were not happy with your 'weak' version of Kagome. Well, at first I thought the same thing. Of course, my patience proved itself again, because I eventually came to see that she is not weak at all, but stronger. Admittedly, her mind is a little wishy-washy at times, but her resolve to do the right thing is powerful. I commend you on sticking to the youkai-alpha-animal background of Sesshomaru. I think it is marvelous how you bring to life his inhumanity. It is very hard to see Kagome bend to him in so many ways and I want to scream at him for treating her the way he does, BUT I do understand it. Being a modern woman raised on modern values, it is hard to accept the demure, docile life of a woman from the feudal era. This does not mean that it was not the way of things and you are doing well in portraying that. Overall, I can say that you have a wonderful imagination and a beautiful way with words. This is one of the most unique stories that I have ever read. Congrat's on the nominations at A Single Spark. You deserved them and I wish you luck in the polls.

    ~Rin
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  • From sparkysrath on April 14, 2008
    I love your story!!! It's sooooo good, especially the references to the wizard of oz. i love that movie. well i hope to see a chapte again soon!

    I.S.
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  • From DarkTigress on April 13, 2008
    Getting better and better! ^_^
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  • From sugar0o on April 12, 2008
    well hot damn that was fantastic, poor inu and the throw up. but other wise thats rather cool, and she's having full youkai twins. neat! i always love this story. ^_^

    as far as assisting with lemons i would say search out Keva, she makes some of the greatest lemons ever. Elle6778, makes some that are fantastic as well. ^_^
    -r0o
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2008
    I would like to commend you on a job well done. If you got the impression from my last review that I thought Kagome was weak that was not my intention. I was merely trying to point out that even the strongst person has their weak moments. It is those weak moments that make us stronger, especially when there is someone who loves them desperately trying...begging them to allow their help. I believe you have tapped into what every human should know in their lifetime...it that nothing can be force and time is the healing of ALL wounds as long as trust is present. Your story is by far the best I've read in a while. This story would be great with or without the addition of a lemon. If you decided to change the character names and publish this story...I would definitely put it in my library of works. Incredible job. Oh and trust your judgment on the lemon, but if you still feel the need for assistance, try and contact some of the authors whose works you enjoy reading and ask for their advice. Better yet, if you have beta, ask her/he...I'm sure they have written a few...or at least corrected and proofread a few. Again, great job and I look forward to your next incredible update.
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  • From sugar0o on April 10, 2008
    wow, that was really informative. i really liked this chapter, and i love that this new female, Michi, is explaining things to Kagome, i must admit that i'm still a tad bit pissed with Rin. I know the point i really do but i kinda just wish that someone else besides Inu, who is no longer the primary being in her life, knew just what kinda hell she's going through. i think of all the characters in this thus far he's probably the closest to understanding her, beyond the Oz, beyond everything. He knows how hard it is for her to just give in to this, though i do understand the need for it, and your flow is fantastic. I just wish there was more understanding there then she's getting. i want her to be able to find peace, and home, but at the same time maybe putting aside what she knows and what is to come, and how to act, she can find some measure of home in a sea of difference. though when we get there, i kinda hope we see everyone else like o crap kags makes scene! either way, love this. you know it! i think i'm just babbling. still love it.
    - r0o
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  • From loretta537 on April 09, 2008
    this is good, i hope sesshomaru takes care of his mother soon. i really like this story, thank you for updating it regularly and sending emails when you do.
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  • From ANON - Draconis on April 08, 2008
    This is an awesome story. I'm sorry you haven't been getting enough reviews, but I just wanted to let you know that you have a kick ass imagination and this story is breath-taking. I absolutely love it. Please, update when you can. I can't wait for the next couple of chapters. It iritates me that Kagome doesn't understand Sesshomaru, but also vice versa. She's human and he's a dog demon. But finally -FINALLY!!- someone can bend to understand the other. Its kind of relieving now.
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  • From DarkTigress on April 07, 2008
    Still one of my favorite stories! ^_^ You're doing great

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  • From BeautifulOblivion on April 07, 2008
    Whoa. I had a few chapters to catch up on. Loved the chapters. I hope to see a new one soon.
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  • From sugar0o on April 07, 2008
    my goodness i have no idea what you did to become so talented, but honestly this chapter has my heart breaking and rebuilding with joy, i know that in all this Kagome has to be broken down to almost nothing, shards of a jewel that was once her beautiful soul. but at the same time i see the pace you set, and the slight hints here and there, and i can see that your going to make it better and brighter in the end then it ever could have been before. I have no idea how much you'll taunt us with heart breakingly sad moments or how many comical moments of laughter you'll allow us, or even how much smooth joy you'll set in the wake of this story, but i know i'll be there for every chapter from 1 to the end, fantastic job! and if you don't do this for a living, maybe you should look into finding a publisher and see what the world thinks of a work thats all you. I'd buy it. this made me happy. :) Yours, - r0o
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  • From ANON - Diane on April 06, 2008
    Sorry for not reviewing much if any, you could take the lack of reviews as a nothing's wrong so I don't need to review type thing. I've been enjoying it although I was sad about Shippou dying.
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