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Reviews for Yellow Brick Road

By : emmaren

From sugar0o on April 06, 2008
holly hannah! you know i love it. how to tell you how much with out gushing is the hard part. I adore your story, there aren't enough ways to tell you how much i love the fact that you actually make me think about what your writing before i get to enjoy it, the possibilities and the conundrums are fantastic, stunning even. and i cant help but find the random yet completely well placed bits from Oz ever so perfect. I cant tell you why there aren't reviews, or why there aren't hits, but i can tell you they are sorely missing out. and i hope that if nothing else this one reviewer is at least enough to tell you its beautiful and a magical way. always your reviewer - r0o

ps. don't worry Dorthy everything will be fine.
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From ANON - mrs sesshy on April 05, 2008
since i don't want you to pop a vein i have to write a review this time...i do enjoy reading this story...the darkness...the lunacy and the cultural protocol... i hope kags will get her fire and optimism back... live without fear! pls. update soon.
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From ANON - Anon on April 05, 2008
I have recently began reading your story and I must say it is very good. It is very dramatic and very sad. I am getting the instinct impression they need to get Kagome to believe in herself again. I believe that her character is way too angsty. I do see why she is, considering the circumstances you have built up around her. It is appropriate for the story. However, somewhere in all of this, Sesho needs to actually show her love, make her feel like she is needed and loved. She has lost that somewhere along the way. She lost everything she has ever loved...her mother, her brother, her grandfather, her friends...Sango, Shippo...She feels like she had failed them all. But she hasn't...She is blind to the fact that she has a new love waiting right there for her to take hold of...He may have taken her purity, but he really did have the best of intensions when he did what he did to her. I believe Sesho is in love with her and he needs to come to that reality and tell her...as a confession if you will. She needs to feel the love he has for her and out of that love will come the strenght for her to fight for her pup and the danger that lurks around it. The sooner Kagome and Sesh come together, the sooner they can prepare for the dangerous battle ahead and hopefully a happy ending. And maybe she may never be able to go home like dorothy did, but she has a new home...one that is waiting for her somewhere over the rainbow...with her pup, Sesh, Miroku and Rin and even Inuyasha. Now that would be a happy ending. Great Job I look forward to your next update.
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From DarkTigress on April 02, 2008
Another great chapter! I must say you've got me hooked on your story... ^_^
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From sugar0o on April 02, 2008
lmao, nah its cool. I actually got it because of my own dog, 'Bert', the only thing he plays with are Chew toys, squeaky toys. He's so possessive, until you give him something new. any ole hoot.

My dear Emily, your story again, is fantastic, in its many facets of both myth and lore, i find myself completely blindly and happily lost in your woven tale. i of coarse cannot wait until you never chapter, because well its just amazing really, i find myself so very pulled into your story, i'm memorized. I hope that if anyone reads reviews before reading the story they will know that this is fantastic! as always - r0o
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From loretta537 on April 01, 2008
this is a great story, i love how kagome keeps referring to the wizard of oz. please let me know when you update my email is loretta_boshell@hotmail.com
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From sugar0o on March 29, 2008
well hot damn you've left me crazed and slightly emotional, in a good and intrigued way. This is such a wonderful story. its so dark and bright at the same time, and i LOVE the Wizard of Oz references. Even more the fact that even in all this darkness Kagome can see the light. its wonderful and i adore you for continuing to write it! please never give up the multi layers and facets of this splendid story! - r0o
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From oneswish on March 29, 2008
yay!! another update.. and an even deeper chapter. it does seem fitting for her to tell the trueth to miroku, good job. u give kags some peace of mind.. and ur lemon was very 'business like'. which would make sense, i think.. but i like how he didnt want to, but had to .. for well yah know... but it was a very good job.. even ur first one.. but than again that one is a different subject on lemon esk ness..

but all in all.. u are great.. and ur tone in ur story is very different, i find it very addicting.. lol!!

YAY!! more oz please.. thats all i want.. OZ!!
THANKYOU!!
higan
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From katme on March 29, 2008
I loves this story to the bone! It is all wonderful and fantastical! I am always on edge waiting for the next chapter so I want you to understand that I mean it when I say I appreciate you work.
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From Rinseternalsoul on March 29, 2008
Man...Kagome is really losing it. She could give a good therapist a run for his money. It was disturbing to realize Kagome's pup was to be used for evil purposes. Poor Kagome. She just can't get a break. And Sesshomaru's such a damned ass that I can't even wish for her to be saved by him. Miroku gives pervert a whole new meaning in this one. Can we say pedophile? haha! The best part was Kagome dousing the old bitch in hot water. It would have been too easy if she melted, but oh so satisfying. Nice job. This story is definitly unique. Until next time~

~Rin
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From DarkTigress on March 26, 2008
I'm so sorry I haven't had the chance to review sooner then this cuz I've been reading this for awhile! But I am making sure to let you know how much I'm loving this story! I'm always happy when i see you've updated! I love the fact that this isn't your everyday sess/kag fic. It's refreshing to find something new and creative with a touch of darkness to it. I must say i am very impressed and am never disappointed with your chapters. Keep up the great work, Your very talented. ^_^

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From oneswish on March 26, 2008
WOW what a twist!

that was soo different.. miroku and rin?? different.. but superising.. cool!! i wish u would have her explain the story to someone.. the snipits need MORE.. lol!! but its written as every chapter perfectly.. dont take soo long!! just kidding.. dont rush either.. but it was a great chapter this time.. im shocked the way u portrayed sango, very very different from what other people do.. but i like it. makes the reader think. so that other fox kit, what is his past like?

THANKYOU!!
higan
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From sugar0o on March 26, 2008
didnt melt her, hahahahaha thats freaking great. lmao. yanno i was expecting Kags to do something akin to crazy, dousing her with water, was not one of them. And i'm so glad that Inu finally realized it was a movie, though i must say i do wonder if Kags will be able to "cleanse" her pup, the kami's did so much to break her to make her prefect for sacrificing herself, they broke her so much, i hope she has enough to be able to do it, it'll be sad If Sess has to kill the pup. because i REALLY dont think even a broken Kags will let him do that. This story is amazing, and i hope its doing some kinda better on the other site as far as reviews go, i know i didn't see many but maybe the the hits are making up for it. - r0o
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From sugar0o on March 21, 2008
i am in shock, this story is possibly one of the betters i have ever read, and it think hat many since i have at least 100 or more that i watch and wait for on one site and at least 30 or more on this one, for this to have so few reviews are watches alarms me. This is such an amazing story if i knew where i could put you up for an award i would its so very VERY unique and amazing, and i honestly just want to sing your praise its a wonderful story. i for one am going to post your story, a link to let me say on the front page of my other site, i think you should up load on ff . net as well. M for story content mind you. but OMG maybe you''ll get a better reply and feel for your story, i hope that the lack of reviews and viewers doesn't deter you bc i'd be very upset if this Dorthy didn't find her way home. i love you play on the wizard of Oz as well, its possibly the most original something i've come across in a while, and the characters are so very in character. its for lack of any way better to say it, amazing. damn good job. - r0o
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From BeautifulOblivion on March 21, 2008
I like where you are going with this. Keep up the good work, and I will keep my eye open for your next update! Take care.
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