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Reviews for Yellow Brick Road

By : emmaren
  • From Rinseternalsoul on March 19, 2008
    Wow, though a bit morbid and fanatical, this story is actually pretty compelling. The sarcastic humor concerning Sesshomaru's mother and his thoughts on beating Inuyasha to a pulp has had me snickering over and over. At first I was deeply disturbed by Kagome's beaten attitude, since she is not the type to let something bring her down for long, but after having her family murdered and then losing poor Shippo - not to mention Sango's turning into super bitch right before death - I began to understand more clearly. Hopefully, Sesshomaru will realize that domination in the inu world means something completely different in human terms. Rape is a horrible thing for a human girl that has already suffered terribly. Hopefully her world become brighter soon. Kagome doesn't deserve the darkness that is invading her life and taking over. You are doing a great job on the story. I look forward to reading the future chapters.

    ~Rin
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  • From sugar0o on March 18, 2008
    honestly i havent got the right words to tell you how much i enjoy this story its very in character, and i do mean very in character, its fantastically simple in a horrible complicated way, its prefect, and i cannot wait for the next chapter. - r0o
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  • From oneswish on March 18, 2008
    this story is written with such a different tone.. its dark and yet it has a hint of childness.. does that make sense?? well thats what i get from it.. i wish the last chap u made was longer.. i know it was mostly about inu and sess but **whinny noise insert here** uhh come oooon. lol!! I do love the SHADOWS thou.. its too different and eunique
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on March 09, 2008
    I hope you update soon. I like the symbolism in this story as well as the allusions from The Wizard of Oz to compare the depths of how lost she is within herself.
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  • From sugar0o on March 08, 2008
    O_O unexpected but wowzers i really do love this story and that chapter was amazing, sadly Kags didn't really enjoy it, that was upsetting but interesting.
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  • From DarkTigress on March 06, 2008
    I LOVE this story so far, for once something more original! You're doing a great job, can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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  • From WalterKraken101 on March 05, 2008
    Only real complaints, or rather corrections, would be "seasons" instead of "senses" in the first line, and using the word "eye" instead of "I" in the last paragraph. Other than that, it looks to be in good shape, and I am enjoying the story as it develops.
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  • From blackicekitten98 on March 04, 2008
    So far it has kept my attention... i really like it.. chapter 3 though i think has a spelling mistake... ~making them less vulnerable to attach.” ~ should attach be attack?

    other wise i look forward to chapter 4..... good job.
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  • From WalterKraken101 on March 04, 2008
    Heh, a very interesting story. I haven't seen one so far written quite like this, and I rather like the way it is written. I am looking forward to reading more chapters of this story.
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