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Reviews for Yellow Brick Road

By : emmaren
  • From blue_heron on February 25, 2017

    "That was fantastic," she said breathlessly. Having just finished this story, I find myself still revealing in the immense depth and consideration so delicately woven into every detail. Not only were you able to execute an original plot, but the incredible play between yearning, heartbreak, triumph, and the true dedication of love was potent and moving. My favorite part? The few lines describing Sesshomaru baring his neck in devotion. Lord. That may have been the true climax of the entire piece. I'm positive my heart skipped a beat at how the 'simple' act synced the entirety of the plot together. Just beautiful. Fantastic writing, you should be very proud! 


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  • From ANON - Esther Clemmens on August 20, 2016

    Wow!!  I'm truly floored by such an amazing and we'll thought out story.  Incidentally, I loved the part where Kagome is kicking butt while quoting "The Wizard of Oz".  I'm certain that would be a real brain teaser for those witnessing.  The riddles she spouts are really confusing- which is great because I LOVE puzzles!  

    Just wanted to let you know this story is definitely a favorite and darkness us always great.  Without darkness, we never truly appreciate at light.  Continue your story in your way- there will always be someone that complains, but you just tune them out.  

    The spelling errors are always fun, I have them too.  It's always fun to reread a story you finished and then face palm when you find a very obvious mistake, but that's what betas are for.  

    Anyways, as I was saying, magnificent story! I hope to see more of your tales as you really do weave an amazing story. 

     


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  • From Stephennie on September 16, 2011
    Awesome.
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  • From ANON - ChaoticReverie on May 23, 2009
    This was such a wonderful story. It was very, very original, and I thoroughly enjoyed the references to 'The Wizard of Oz'.
    I think your depiction of Kagome was incredibly well done. She is very much a martyr... and this seems like something she would do. I enjoyed that it was not all unicorns and rainbows and sunshine. I truly think the loss and tragedy are the roots of every good story. As horrid as that may sound...
    I liked all of your original characters, as well as your knowledge of history, religion, etc...
    I spotted a few missing commas here and there, but really that's about it. That's pretty damn good!!
    I'm going to check out your other works now.
    CR~
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  • From ANON - lj on March 05, 2009
    I LOVE IT
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  • From ANON - Amoraluv on February 28, 2009
    I finally sat down and read this whole thing and it blew my mind. I wish I had some mary j while reading this thing then I know I would be having a trippy good time. So keep up ur writing and I can't wait to read some more of your stories. Ciao :-D
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  • From Alpine02 on February 22, 2009
    I was enraptured by this fic... I couldn't stop reading.. Thanks so much for making this great.
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  • From ANON - Infinite Silence on February 04, 2009
    Wow! I Love this story!!!! You and Teensie-Sama are my heroes!!!! I hope that All is well and I will read all of the stories that you write, and I will try to review to the best of my ability.
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  • From DarkTigress on February 04, 2009
    You did such an awesome job on this story!! =]
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  • From sugar0o on February 03, 2009
    O_O i think i'm gunna cry thats jsut the best ever! seriously Em, r0o loves you! and your stories. this will probably always be my favorite, my dearest, my lovely YBR♥ this r0o cannot ever give you enough praise for this venture in dark delight. loved it. - r0o
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  • From DarkTigress on January 31, 2009
    Was this finally the end? Well anyways... Love it! ^_^ So happy I came across this Fic. It's one of the best ones I've read. GREAT WORK!!!
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  • From sparkysrath on January 30, 2009
    It is not that I mind all the epilogues, I was just curious, and as you know the saying I will not repeat it. ^_^ I am glad that you post though! It makes me happy! ^_^ and a happy I.S. is a good I.S. ^_^ hope that all is well.

    I.S.
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  • From Reymond on January 26, 2009
    Thank you very much to add all these little details to close correctly your wonderful story ! For Inuyasha, that's fun, with Kouga's daughter !!!

    A bientôt
    Your french reader,

    Merely Truth
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  • From ANON - infinite silence on January 25, 2009
    Hello! I have reviewed before! lol, I just thought the ninja approach would be awsome! anywho, you keep titling chapters as epilogs, however you aren't finished, so wouldn't they technically not be epilogs, because of the fact that it isn't the end... I just confused myself.... nevermind.... i'm just gonna say Hello! and that i very much enjoy your story! Hope you update soon!

    I.S.
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  • From sugar0o on January 25, 2009
    hahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!! omfg thats fantastic that he mated Kougas brat i love this! though i cant wait for more i have to say i still love it so very much. so by all accounts they have abotu 350 years left til they catch up with kags time eh? how are her pups, etc? i cant wait to see what you have planned for the end of this story. you know i never could tell you just how much i love this, though i kinda hope that kags puts the arrogant cub in her place should she need to! - r0o
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