Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for Real

By : GodOfInsanity
  • From NihilEtNemo on September 07, 2009
    That's an interesting take, the whole 'unreal' thing... I think one of the prompts in the list of challenges I have to write is "real". You mind if I'm "inspired" by your set-up here (that is, steal it ^^; )?

    Also, you mentioned being a fan of my In A Blue Moon stories, so I thought I would direct you toward the sequel that you helped inspire me to actually get typed and posted, if you're interested: http://inu.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600095687 . No pressure, but thanks for that. ^-^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on May 12, 2008
    ...possibility to develop our own (the fan's) ideas.

    LOL Sorry about the double post. Well, I'll stop babbling now.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on May 12, 2008
    Oh yeah, about the discussions regarding who is seme or uke. I fond it very intriguing when people dare to break traditional way of thinking and step outside the box. As I have written Sephiroth as the receiver next to Vincent, which according to some was unusual since most find Seph being the giver. But the thing is, that basically we would never know that. A lot of dominant people like to be the one cared for and spoiled in bed and besides that is also one way of dominating isn't it... letting the other one do the job. Anyway, I think the beauty of Fan Fiction is to give birth to other ideas than just what is given to the audience through the original work. If we always followed the canon then our fan fiction stories would be nothing but cheap rip-offs of the original concept. It is only the fan's who can create the diversity that original authors neither have the time, the imgination and the possibility to accomplish.
    I often encourage people to give their imagination flight... Of course some stories will be liked, other not... but still this is the
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on May 12, 2008
    Wow, when you wrote you were poetic you weren't kidding. You really are and I tell you the story was very nicely written. I haven't seen a story put into poetry in this way that actually flowed on as effortlessly as yours did and the emotions were captured along with a whole scenerey of past memories and present obsessions. You weaved in a lot of information. I am impressed. Very well done! :)
    Report Review

  • From mamarita on March 22, 2008
    Thanks for the review on my story. I didn't mean to sound averse to this story- it's great. I am just not a subby Sesshy fan, although I can see why many think that Naraku would be THE ONLY ONE who could be dom. As you said in your story, Naraku "is not real" until the very end to Sesshomaru. That would explain a lot. Anyway, if you wish, my email address is mamarita_2003@yahoo.com I never put my email as hidden! DLS
    Report Review

  • From salomewilde on March 22, 2008
    Ooh, nasty. Nothing like forcing Sesshomaru to confess his feelings. That he uses the capital letter for the pronoun ("He") when thinking of Naraku is so telling. I love that his breath is like spice and fire. Very creative. And his scent being heavy on the wind. Your Sesshomaru gives up a lot more than mine when I write him, even when I force him to be "uke" - but that is the pleasure of writing him as we would have him be/come. Enjoyed the read.
    Report Review

  • From GodOfInsanity on March 21, 2008
    Careful, Demon Lady, there's a lot of Subby Sess fans out there...I should know. They have been badgering me to update for a long time now. Some of them are crazy like me, too. lol. But like I said in review of your sess/miroku, thanks for the review. I do appreciate every review I get, even if its vague and short like "please update soon!" or "I hate your story, Sesshoumaru is NOT an uke and he would never have sex with Naraky anyway!"

    ^^ You're name is interesting though...DemonLadySesshoumaru... does that mean ur his lady or that he's a lady?
    Report Review

  • From mamarita on March 20, 2008
    OK, It's well written, and I like it... But I hate Sesshomaru being uke to Naraku. I'm sorry, but he is THE demon lord of the western lands, the most powerful demon around, and you make him uke to Naraku? Come on!!! How about writing another one, and have it turn out the other way around... Just a suggestion... DLS

    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!