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Reviews for Come Undone

By : obsidiantresses
  • From eyecanread on May 01, 2012
    This was incredible. So amazing. I loved your thesaurian vocabulary. But truthfully the story was delicate and moving. I had hoped it would end the way it did but I will be honest that I hadn't truly expected it. Very nicely done.
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  • From pammy on April 05, 2008
    I agree with the previous reviewer -- it's a wonder you haven't received more reviews for this story. Very nicely done, very hot. You certainly had my attention.

    I look forward to your future efforts.
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  • From kirarakat55 on April 03, 2008
    that was absolutely amazing from the beginning to the very end. It was captivating and alluring. You truly have a gift and I can't wait to read more of your work. This was probably the best sesshomaru/kagome fix I have read. You had me going with her being a high priced prostitute but on the end it was...well we all read the story. Again it was truly amazing thank you for giving us a great lemon and an adoring love story!
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  • From SweatyCup on April 02, 2008
    WOOOOOOOOOW!!!I could have never guessed any of that! His fantasy was to be her first and last.And that from the BEGINING they were pretending that he was a lonely man and that she was an escourt all because it was his birthday.Even in they MINDS it seemed it looked like all off that pretending was so real.Great job at making me gasp and be surprised out my mind!!!Lol. Loved it!!
    Love Always^
    ^Dei Dei
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  • From sugar0o on April 01, 2008
    that was amazing! fantastic job!
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  • From candycrys on March 31, 2008
    I loved it. I don't know why you have so little reviews. After that acting she did I hoped he gave her that money because as I see it she earned every penny ^_^
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  • From sugar0o on March 23, 2008
    review: OMG this has got to be one of the hottest fics i've read, i give you kudos because a lot of people just write a lemon and their done, your taking into acct full emotional consequences. its fabulous.

    idea of his fantasy: to be loved. honestly loved.
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  • From jestergirl06 on March 22, 2008
    I think that his fantasy is something like he is the teacher and she is the virgin student who he desires. So is not every guys fantasy to at least take one girls virginity, Kagome could act like he is taking hers. That's what I think. I love your story please update soon.!! XD
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on March 22, 2008
    That is WTF?!?! Well, this is a different twist on this couple, and I am looking forward to the next chapter. Till then, take care.
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  • From sugar0o on March 22, 2008
    lmao great last liner ^_^
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  • From babygirl20008 on March 21, 2008
    i love the story but i still don't know what her wants so you have to update soon so i can find out. Untill next time.
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  • From lovelessjayson on March 20, 2008
    Wow this is wow...really great I like how you put it as if we are the person. Congrates you got my attention. Hope you up date soon I would love to read more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2008
    This story is good, but why are you using "you"? Use "I" or "me".

    I breathe ... instead of you breathe ... etc ... It looks weird when you have "you" all over the story, you know?
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