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Reviews for Dance Among the Cherry Blossoms

By : angelicmemories
  • From ANON - fairychick159 on July 08, 2010
    I LOVED IT,you have talent with lemons...ive read soem good lemons but i really liked yours.Hope you write more great lemons!!!

    XD
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  • From ANON - Crystal on December 21, 2008
    I really enjoy reading Dance Among The Cheery Blossom couldn't stop reading it i hope you add more to this Stories of Sesshoumaru & Kagome AdultFanFictions
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  • From girlfighter2 on August 06, 2008
    i love the story it was really good for your first lemon
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 23, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Sexgoddess2110 on March 30, 2008
    Very good for your first Lemon! Made me tingle lol but I almost wish it was continuing or was linked to Mine I would've loved to keep reading this I love the traditonal matings between Sess and Kags, haven't read one in a long time *tears* oh well hope you make another one-shot soon I love them great job!

    Arry
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  • From ANON - Ivy on March 30, 2008
    I really liked it! You defintely have a talent for writing. I couldn't tell it was your first lemon, because it was so beautiful and eloquent. Hopefully, you add more chapters to this but it's great as a oneshot =)
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  • From Pinksweetheart3 on March 29, 2008
    SEQUIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz
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  • From ANON - AIdeen on March 29, 2008
    I personally loved it!!! I think this was a great story and LOVED the lemon!! I would loved iti f you considered a sequel or more chapters to this one!!! I would love to see how you would transform Kags!!! I loved it, very good story!!!
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  • From AnimeLuver89 on March 29, 2008
    i really liked it that was great for a first lemon wow lol i really think you should add more chapters to it because that didnt really sound like an ending it sounded more like the story was just beginning anywho good job you should feel proud it was a good story so give yourself a pat on the back lol
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  • From lovelessjayson on March 28, 2008
    Well congrates it was no attempt you did it, and very HOTLY I might add good job. I hope to read more from you.
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  • From katme on March 28, 2008
    I enjoyed this story immensely, although when I was reading i it seemed as if Sesshomaru undressed twice ;P. I disappoints me that it is only a oneshot because it has potential for so much more. Will the change be painful for Kagome or is it that she will not notice until she has awoken? How will she adjust to life no longer human, will she have trouble controlling her new powers and what about getting used to and using her new senses? How will Sesshomaru help her adjust? Will he realize that she needs to adjust or will he fail to understand? I NEED the answers, REALLY your killin' me here.

    Share the joy,
    KAT
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  • From ANON - sky_040 on March 28, 2008
    ur have so much room to write more of the story, it seems like a shame to just end it there.
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  • From emmaren on March 28, 2008
    I think that it is a good atempt at a lemon. Now I admit I like to read smut and what I have found that makes some smut better than others is the perspective. You did an excellent job discribing the physical act. What you probably want to explore now is how to discribe the sensations that occur in the individual during the different stages of foreplay and consumation. Like I said, I think this is a good first attempt. I am at the same point with my writing, where I am trying to figure out how to write a lemon. There are some great authors out there that have mastered this art form. You could read the progression in their works to see how they have obtained it.

    Emily
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