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Reviews for Proserpina

By : Cathartesaura
  • From ANON - Manni on December 10, 2008
    I didn't like the story. It made me sick while reading it but by some morbid curiousity that killed the cat, I kept on. You have a good ability at writing, I can't deny that. And the story had such a REAL quality to it (which was what made me sick. The fact that I could picture it actually happening). Unlike some people who write stories that suck and just throw in poorly written rape scenes because they think it will spice up their pathetic attempt at a plot.
    Still, I know Sesshomaru's cruel but I always thought he held his honor in too high a ragard to ever rape someone.
    But you were good at evoking an emotion out of me and in the end, that's what writing is for. I have to give you credit for that.
    But don't bother updating anymore. You really did end it well (even if it wasn't happy), and sequals tend to ruin things.
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  • From QueenCeaona on November 16, 2008
    Although I usually like to read about Kagome and Sesshoumaru in more romantic situations, I must sat that I rather enjoyed this! I found it to be well written and well within the bounds of believability. Very nicely done!
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  • From ohsnaptheresa on October 29, 2008
    AHHHHH SOOOO GOOOOODDD! PLEASE CONTINUE THE GOOD WORK! if you plan on writing another sessho/kagome fic, can you e-mail me at ohsnap_theresa@yahoo.com? thank you!
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  • From harunosakura001 on August 16, 2008
    great story are you going to wright a sequel?
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  • From Rinseternalsoul on August 05, 2008
    An interesting take on Sesshomaru's character and a twist at the end that I did not expect. To tell you the truth, I thought for sure that you were going to let her die. It just seemed to be leading up to that until, well, until he kissed her. I realized then that he was growing to care for her--in his own demented way. Hot sex, nice story. And it was comforting to see that she was able to return to her friends...even if only for a little while. Thanks for the read!

    ~Rin
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2008
    Now this is why it´s called "Proserpina" =)
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  • From ANON - alemap on July 28, 2008
    Wow... Just lovely. I hope you decide to write more S/K.
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  • From savewolf on July 28, 2008
    love the story so far would you mind if i ask if they are going to fall in love with one another it would be a great way to make the story even mor einterestng since he already desiers her flesh perhaps nw his inner dogcan claim her soul (lol sounded abt odd here sorry for thath) but i really like the story i would like to ask if you can from now on email me to normamourani@yahoo.com whenver you update this story i really love it and maybe we can be friends?
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  • From ANON - amadoni on July 28, 2008
    Good take on a Greek/Roman myth. I always wondered how you were going to take this concept. I like it. I only wish there was more only because I love your smut. I liked the ending.
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  • From DarkTigress on July 28, 2008
    Loved it, loved it, loved it!! ^_^
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  • From DarkFrost on July 28, 2008
    YAY!!! i liked the ending, it wasn't fairytalish, it was realistic, and thats something i really appreciate. Great job!
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  • From ANON - taixi on July 28, 2008
    I have really enjoyed this story; I'm sad to see it is finished already. One comment on the ending, though: although I liked a lot about this final chapter (Sessh's decision to not kill her immediately was nice), I thought the very end (with Kagome back in Inuyasha's arms) was rather abrupt. For example, I can't imagine that Inuyasha would just go ahead and accept the arrangement Sesshomaru was proposing -- yet it seemed like he (Inuyasha) was almost acquiescing in the arrangement with his final thought, "for now." If you are going to go back and revise the last chapter, I suggest trying to flush out how Sessh will ensure that he can get Kagome back from Inuyasha (one suggestion might be by playing on Kagome's own sense of duty, like I'm doing you a favor by letting you go, thus you must promise to return for half the year). Or even better (rather than revising this ending) would be to see a sequel, since your story is otherwise so enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - Lena on July 28, 2008
    I loved this story. Keep up the great work and I can't wait for your next piece.
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  • From benevolentspy on July 27, 2008
    OH. MY. GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was absolutely amazing. I cannot even express how perfect that last chapter was I love love love it I am completely distraught that it's over. :( That was just a wonderful and amazing story thank you so much for such a good read and I hope to see more of your work in the future!!!
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  • From ANON - sweetkijo on July 27, 2008
    Bravo!! Bravo!! I think the last chapter was fantastic. I smell sequal though...lol! Thank you for writing it. I really enjoyed!!
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