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Reviews for Proserpina

By : Cathartesaura
  • From scarletwitchextreme on July 27, 2008
    heck man u could have made it longer than cut us so short all of a sudden. It was good, too good, hope u make a sequel or i hope she gets away to her own time, atleast thats my hope. Love the interpretation of the mythology and I do hope there is a sequel down the line somewhere.
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  • From ANON - Yukii on July 23, 2008
    OMG this is soooooooo good, I can't wait for the next installment. Write more soon!!
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  • From ANON - .... on July 13, 2008
    I loooove this story...please update soon
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  • From on July 13, 2008
    Ehhh I really cant wait till u update!!!!
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  • From ANON - A. Frost on July 13, 2008
    I love this fic so much, could you please send me an email when it is updated ;)
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  • From ANON - A. Frost on July 12, 2008
    dAMN! I love this story so far: its intense, dark, and smutty. You are a talented writer and really have a way with evoking the sensations and emotions that you intend to have your readers feel. good job :)
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  • From ANON - ME on July 10, 2008
    Ok, question. I know this fic is loosly based on the Hades Persephonie myth. So far Seshoumaru has taken Kagome and is dragging her to his stronghold. I am just wondering if you are finished with the myth and now going your own way completly, or if there will still be a few similiarities. Persephonie was able to go return home for a time but always had to return. Now I'm not thinking Sesshoumaru, at least at this point, will let Kagome go far from his reach, but will there be a time when she can visit her family if she swears to return?

    Just curious, love the fic and wait with baited breath for the following chapters. Ta-ta.
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  • From Lunar84 on July 03, 2008
    I have to say I'm really enjoying this fic. Everyone is in character, the story flows beautifuly, and though the plot is overused this is still a very enjoyable read.

    Having said that, I was reading some of the other reviews and noticed there were a few that said you were not going to make this a happy ending and that these two were pretty much going to just remain how they are. I'm confused because there are no author notes saying this is what is going to happen. I guess you deleted them? Not sure.

    If that is the case that is truly sad, because it seems you lost one devoted fan that used to reveiw for you consistantly. I'm sure there will be others who will do the same. It's your story though, and i respect that. You write for yourself. But, if you do happen to write to also please the masses I dont think a fic without a developing relationship between these two characters is going to make anyone happy.

    You really are a great author and this story has alot of potential. I hope you can shed some light on these missing author notes. And what your plans for this story are.
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on July 02, 2008
    EEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!! sesshoumaru that bastard, but that chapter ruled, he seemed so clueless, the bluntness the rawness, and POOR KAGOME...sigh, i dont see this turning out very promising for her...lol. MORE
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on July 02, 2008
    Again this chapter thrilled me, it is so far from the norm, and its so raw and blunt that I love it so much. It is a hot story and I cant wait for more, u have hooked line and sinker. Hope u update soon, a=cant wait to have more...
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  • From ANON - rachel on July 01, 2008
    please update i'm absolutely dying without another chapter!!
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  • From snowbird on June 25, 2008
    I'm sad but I wish you luck with your story for those that enjoy it. You're a good writer. I just wish you would use your talent and do an indepth, emotional story about them. Your comment killed my interest and I'm dropping the story from my fav list so this is good bye.
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  • From ANON - echnaton on June 25, 2008
    Nice story. At first I didnīt want to read it because the plot is a bit used by now. But then I did, nevertheless, and I didnīt regret it. Itīs very well done. Itīs very realistic, both Sesshoumaru and Kagome are in character.
    Just one thing: As I read the comment at the end of chapter 5 I just had to look to your profile. You donīt write marriage, fluff and pregnancy. Thatīs ok (at least with me), but I have a wish: could you please not write another torture- fic? Please let Kagome get away on her own and not fall madly in love with "Sesshy" and please donīt let her obsess over him sexually! Please! =P
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  • From snowbird on June 21, 2008
    I just read your comments in the last paragraph of this chapter. I hope I misunderstood your meaning. Is what you said to mean that this story is not going to have a happy ending? Do you mean to say that they are not going to fall in love and eventually become mates? That there's nothing but sex between them in the future? Sex is good but without a plot, it means nothing and a lot of the enjoyment of reading it disappears. If your answer is yes to my questions, then my enjoyment for this story just flew out the window and I will quit reading it. That would make me sad because I had high hopes and excitement with the beginning plot of this story. I'm a romantic at heart and don't like to read lemons just for the sake of smut. I like romantic smut. Please tell me my fears and sad heart is for nothing and that you do plan a future for them.
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  • From Rinseternalsoul on June 20, 2008
    Wow, your lemon writing skills are really good. Sesshomaru is a cold hearted bastard. Poor Kagome! She seems defeated. I hope Inuyasha can find, and save her, from the hard cruel fate that Sesshomaru intends for her. I would hate to see her unloved and used, unable to ever see her friends and family again. Hurry Inuyasha! Knock some sense into Sesshomaru so that he will suddenly realize how much he needs Kagome in his life! Thanks for the read!

    ~Rin
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