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Reviews for Proserpina

By : Cathartesaura
  • From ANON - demonpuppy on June 20, 2008
    Please update! Please oh please! I really, really love this fic! So update fast and make it good. Though all of it ahs been good in the previce chapters.
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  • From ANON - denity on June 20, 2008
    wow u have a great story! update plz!
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  • From SparkleKit on June 19, 2008
    I'm very pleased with this fanfiction - most authors are all into as you say 'Mating/Marriage followed by babies, fighting a few wars etc and thats it. Its nice to see something a little bit different. Well done!
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  • From ANON - anon on June 19, 2008
    i enjoyed your fic very much. keep up a great job.
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  • From ANON - rachel on June 18, 2008
    man you certainly do not disappoint. i check your story everyday and i love the way this is going. please please please update soon!
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  • From ANON - akasha on June 18, 2008
    too short!! can't wait til next update! i've enjoyed this story so far. will inu & co. try a rescue attempt? And when will we find out what the weird the tingling sensation that kagome experienced was? pretty pretty please update soon!
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  • From snowbird on June 18, 2008
    Thank you for the update. I had to laugh when I pictured him in my mind carrying Kagome the way you described. Aw schucks! So he has control over his sperm. Then what was the tingling for? Also, why did he have to check his semen to make sure it was inert? I think it would be funny if he got the shock of his life with pups from her. heehee. Does he actually mean to keep her for the rest of her life? So he intends to make her his concubine since he does not want a human as a mate to pup with. In fact, I think it would be fate's revenge on him to accidentally pup her. I wish I could remember the name and/or author of a story I once read of where he pupped Kagome during their first time together. He, also, thought he had control over his sperm. It was set in moderm times after the well closed and she met him. He was still un-mated and watching over Rin's ancestors. If you or anyone out there knows this story, please list it in a review here. I would most heartily appreciate it. I hope you don't mind me requesting this during my review to you. I thank you. Anyway, I believe that once Kagome gets over the shock of everything thats happened, I think Sesshoumaru's going to have his hands full with her. I like a Kagome with fire and a back bone. You've got me all excited with your story. I like lots of good sex, too, but a good plot to back it up helps to make the sex even better.
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  • From ANON - Viper on June 18, 2008
    Poor girl! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2008
    YAY an update finally YAY nmore porn thans
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2008
    This fic is very interesting, even if the plot is somewhat old. Sesshoumaru is very in character, if not a tidbit too cruel (for my taste). But thatīs ok. Itīs very exciting anyway.
    Poor Kagome. I hope she will be able to escape this fate. I think her reaction to the things he did to her to be very realistic, by the way. She doesnīt like what he does, even if he is the Sesshoumaru, as in too many other stories.
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Amadoni on June 18, 2008
    This is probably one of the best non-con, hostage situtions that I've read in awhile. Update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Kitty on June 18, 2008
    I'm loving this fic PLEASE write more soon!!
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  • From ANON - denena on June 18, 2008
    you have a wonder with words. this story is a complete package with all the elements that make it fantastic. i can't wait until your next chapter. i'll be eagerly awaiting..
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  • From ANON - Tori on June 18, 2008
    I have to say the story brings a nice twist, I enjoy the fact that its all about the sex, and thats it. Keeping them in chara, I enjoyed as well. I find it interesting twist that, Sess, won't give her back. But I like the fact that he keeps her, would it be forever, it would be fun to see, what the future would hold if this was still the case, of it being sex years from now. Would Kagome drop everything cause he called her for a quick rut. XD
    Sorry ran away, I thought it would be a good sequel.
    Anyway, I wanted to say keep this up, the story is good and I enjoy it lots. I can't wait to see what Inuyasha and the gang handle this. Will they except this lost. I love it its fresh,the story reviles the senses. Good work

    Tori
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  • From snowbird on June 16, 2008
    Here I am again. This is merely a request for an update. I'm even on my poor old fat knees, begging. heehee. This story is on my fav list and I check it every day.
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