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Reviews for Proserpina

By : Cathartesaura
  • From ANON - Nozuko on May 20, 2008
    Man, no criticisms here! You're story is in the perfect set up for a smash hit! I hope hope hope you update relatively soon! It would break my heart to see such a great start to a story be left behind; you have great writing talent! I love the whole dominance thing Sesshy has: that seems to be his thing, huh? Well it works out extreeeeeeemely well in Proserpina. Update soon!!
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  • From ANON - sashay_sesshay on May 19, 2008
    I am absolutely dying for another chapter!!! Please update your story soon so I don't fall over and die!!
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  • From ANON - snowbird on May 18, 2008
    Wow! You really have me hooked on this story. Hopefully you plan to have something happen to cause her to be with him longer than he planned. Sure, having his scent on her will make Inuyasha angry and the humiliation will stay with her, but she will still have her innocence intact. If Sesshoumaru were to take that, Inuyasha's suffering would be much more painful. Not only does he dislike Inuyasha, but he has to dislike Kagome for her part in his defeat and loss of his arm in his father's tomb. His "mark" (loss of virginity) would forever be there between Inuyasha and Kagome. I hope you plan to regenerate his arm in the near future. I like him better with both arms. He actually does get it back in the manga along with his sword Bakusaiga. I eagerly await your next update.
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  • From ANON - jessesshy on May 18, 2008
    You=Just added to my favorite author's list! This is a wicked sweet story.
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  • From ANON - Mag-ome on May 18, 2008
    Hot hot hot! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - hungarianhunks on May 17, 2008
    you are a brilliant writer, and your story is magnificant. i pray that you continue this story and soon! i cannot wait for the next insallment!
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  • From ANON - Demonic on May 17, 2008
    GREAT! LOVE LOVE LOVE!
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  • From ANON - Marie on May 17, 2008
    MMmm! I like it. Please post.
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  • From ANON - rachel on May 17, 2008
    I really like your story, I think it has amazing potential with the way your plot is portrayed. Please update with another chapter soon! Send me an email of an update if you could..
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  • From ANON - sesshydoglover on May 16, 2008
    PLEASE PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON!!
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  • From agentANBUhatake on April 27, 2008
    This is hawt. . . I can't wait for your next update. I love how you got Sesshomaru addicted to Kagome's taste and I have to admit, that was, wow.

    Do your best and like I said, waiting for the next installation! :D
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  • From katme on April 27, 2008
    so far this story has been a brilliant work of art, I was disappointed to find you did not have others posted but I shall continue to hope. will they continue moving tomorrow? Will kagome break down and eat when she is offered food? will she be able to move much further with ought food? these questions and more await your next chapter with baited breath.

    Share the joy,
    Kat
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on April 26, 2008
    That chapter was very dark. I hope you keep it that way for a while. It has a lot of really hot possibilities. Take care till later and I hope to see another chapter up soon.
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  • From katme on April 26, 2008
    this is amazing (one of my favorite myths because it explanes the seasons)I cannot wait for the next chapter, all i have to say is bravo!

    Share the joy,
    Kat
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