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Reviews for Domesticating Dog Demons

By : DarkMoonQueen
  • From angel23 on May 11, 2020

    Please update soon 🙏


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  • From razgriz on May 17, 2008
    What a great story please update soon. It's so sweet that it calms my soul. Good luck
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  • From AnimeLuver89 on May 10, 2008
    awwwwww i love this story so far its soooooo cuute i really hope you update it soon cause its good ^.^
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  • From ANON - ashatie on May 08, 2008
    wat can u say awesome i can that was awesome u must write more pwease
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  • From ANON - sliver39 on May 08, 2008
    This reads like a 8 year-old wrote it. As an outline.
    Seriously, you're 19 and you didn't bother to correct anything? There is no real detail, if Kagome were any more sweet, she'd give you cavities just by looking at her. And Sess wanting Kagome after she's been caring for him like a mother, there is no way in Heaven that he'd do that. He'd be having major identity issues for one thing. His earlier memories would be telling him he's a big bad demon lord, while his most recent would be saying Kagome is his mother. And you don't start lactating just because a baby is around. If that was true, we'd all be wearing nursing bras 24/7. Inuyasha really doesn't want to kill Sess. He just wants to be left alone and keep his sword. He doesn't like him, but he's not a kill on sight hate.
    This needs major revision and a real plot. You should have enough education under your belt to be brave enough to revamp this into a better story.
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  • From DawnaSama on May 07, 2008
    all im going to say is. you've been cheated otta reviews, his story is starting to pull itsself together, and I love it. keep up the good work and I hope to see more of your stuff.

    Dawna Sama

    PS: my e-mail has changed, if you want to write back then im me at AquaSpirit23.
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  • From ANON - pauly on May 07, 2008
    I COMPLETELY LOVE IT. PLEASE, PLEASE, UPDATE SOON, PLEASE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Samantha on May 07, 2008
    Where are the other chapters? Nice story though!
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