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By : RadioActiveOrange
  • From angel23 on May 11, 2020

    Please update


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  • From adeaneri on May 31, 2008
    that was very well written. i would hate to be a female back then. expecially a nible female. well whoever complain there was no romance too bad the author did say there was none. that was one oneshot that i enjoyed greatly. hope your ass isn't hurting to much cause this oneshot was meaty goodness
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  • From bluemoonvixen on May 29, 2008
    Not sure why you would have been reported, but eh.

    Anyway, it's a good story, and you're right, a happy ending is usually only in fairytails. A lot of the times, marriages were arranged or what not, very seldom was it out of love. Or a requirement due to someone getting the girl pregnant and the need for the girl's father to save face. But I'll admit, I'm one of the goobers who likes to romantisize my fanfics, lol.

    Anywho, the story was good and tense. If you ever decide to make it into something other than just a oneshot, I'm sure a great extended plotline could evolve.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 29, 2008
    Why would they report you for that? Yes, I do know that this is AFF, but it doesn't mean it HAS TO be a lemon. It doesn't have to have lemons in the story.

    Anyways, I love your stories, they're funny and heart-breaking. I feel like killing Sesshy in this story ... shhh! Don't tell him!! He'll come out from out of no where and kill mee!!! SSSSHHHHHHH!!

    And OH MY GOD!! I love "Furry"!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THAT!! SOON!! :coughcoughnowcoughcough:
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  • From ANON - Merely Truth on May 29, 2008
    Hello ! I find your story very good, but I'm afraid that on AFF, the readers are expecting some quality in the lemon. You did put one in the story, but too quickly described ! I would have liked more details and more thoughts from the characters. Perhaps another time... The plot is to be developed, let it become a big story ! Good luck !

    Frome an mommy and french reader,

    Bonjour de la France,

    Merely Truth
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  • From Eric072691 on May 28, 2008
    1st review.. Anyways,

    This is a good start, I personally don't see many errors (then again mostly I only see the good).

    What I like:
    +The story line, even though it's a oneshot, it feels like the beginning of a long story, a story that would develop the relationship between Sessh and Kags.
    A question like, will he grow to love her or will he lover her as a possession shows up in my mind.

    What I don't like:
    +nothing, I can't find anything wrong personally, but like I said, I only see the good things ^_^

    ~Legacy
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