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Reviews for CLAIMING KIN by Salome and Talon

By : salomewilde
  • From aleabeth on November 17, 2008
    *choke*
    poor Kin/Ken
    That bull died too damn quick!!!
    *mumbles*
    Hurt our Kin...
    *mumble,mumble*
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  • From myperversities on November 16, 2008
    Awwww so god damned cute!!! I LOVE it!!! It was so sweet and I love how attached Sessh is becoming to Kin as well as Ken. He's like a knight in shining armor to the rescue and to think he's going to let everyone know Kin is HIS and not to lay a finger on him is just adorable!!! Can't wait for more please don't leave me hanging with that cliffy too long!!! Love you guys, keep up the great work...I'll always read it.
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  • From Izzanami on November 09, 2008
    Wow, this was so great! I was all excited when I woke up this morning to read this, I even did my little jumping in my seat clapping happy dance. I'm still *squeeing* in delight. You were right it was a long chapter, but I'm glad; it was awesome, and it was soooooooooo hot. I love long chapters. This is definitely one of my favorite chapters so far too. I really liked getting to see Onii and his father interact in the present, I always wondered what he would be like around his father now grown up since the other chapters with them before were from the past... and they were awesome too.

    I love the new Onii doll. That picture I'm drawing, I think I'll have Kin holding that one since it's soft, and furry, and Kin likes Onii's fur so much. It's sketched lightly in his little hand right now so it wil be easy to make it the furry soft one. I love that he has a doll of Onii, it's so cute. one of those little detaails I love.

    I was surprised how brave Ken was that he was trying to bite and scratch Papa, and then he sat on the desk like he was supposed to even though he was scared and didn't like what has happeneing. Sesshoumaru is so good at dealing with his father, it seems he would be very difficult to be around with his overwhelming Alphaness. It was incredibly hot to read Onii submit hmself to his father I never thought I'd see him so willingly do that. It made it all the hotter though that he was the one that initiated it. That was so funny when Kin said he thought Onii was more beautiful than their father. He is definitely very honest.

    I love how close Onii and Kin/Ken have become, I think he is more caring than his father, and I think his little brother is what has helped make him that way. They are very good for eachother, the compliment one another.

    I will of course be waiting in anticipation for the next lovely chapter.
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  • From midnightsweet on November 09, 2008
    that was something. deep is more like it. still enjoyable.
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  • From pseudohanyou on November 08, 2008
    Fucking YUM. I absolutely adored seeing Sess submit to his father in the way he did. And the way Sess subtly challenged his father for Kin was OMG FAP. Another marvelous chapter. :3
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  • From aleabeth on November 08, 2008
    one word:
    Powerful
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  • From pcpalomo on October 26, 2008
    please continue the story
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  • From midnightsweet on October 24, 2008
    sweet one
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  • From aleabeth on October 23, 2008
    Papa showing up, should there be a "dum...de...dum...dum" inserted here?
    I absolutely LOVE when the two of them are alone.
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  • From ANON - Truly~Wished on October 23, 2008
    Kin is so sweet and adorable. Such a great story and I love to find another chapter when I pop in to check.
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  • From ANON - lildevil on October 15, 2008
    when are you going to add the ones with kouga if you already did then witch chapter is it cause those were the only ones i wanted to read
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 11, 2008
    this fanfic is messed up. it should only be inuyasha and sesshomaru. not no kagura and kini~!
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  • From pseudohanyou on October 07, 2008
    I just realized that it doesn't specify what chapter we're reviewing. So from now on, I must do this:

    Chapter 19


    I'm gonna fangirl here and say OMFG. That was so hot. That Kini takes so much pleasure in being their wetnurse is the ultimate hotness. And the way Kin seduced her in his own little way was insane.

    *is intent on writing a milky fic now*

    You captured Kin splendidly, I hope Auntie Talon loves this as much as I did.


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  • From pseudohanyou on October 07, 2008
    This chapter was so...rounded? No, that's not the word I was looking for. Something akin to vast; as in though it was only one chapter, there was so much going on. But the main feeling I got from it was Love. It's amazing how Kin has gone, in Onii's eyes, from being an annoyance, to a pet, to something cherished.

    I couldn't stop smiling from the moment they landed at the base of the Goshinboku. That Sess was ready to share that part of himself with Kin, to even tell him that it was his special place where he used to go...to see him open up was wonderful. You know me, I'm not one for the WAFF, but this was SO much more than that. It was, perhaps, the opening of a new understanding between the two; Onii seems to be admitting to himself, little by little, that Kin is perhaps the most important thing in his world.

    Need I even say that I loved it?
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  • From ANON - Truly~Wished on October 04, 2008
    Aw, they're so cute. I love this story, it's so fun to read and every chapter changes the tone of the story just a little.
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