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Reviews for CLAIMING KIN by Salome and Talon

By : salomewilde
  • From theonlytalonsage on August 14, 2008
    The wet nurse segments are among my favorite parts of our rp's...I know they're yours too love!! I'm so excited to finally introduce Kini to our readers!!

    Also, a reminder to our beloved readers that Kin=Inuyasha :D
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  • From TrulyWished on August 13, 2008
    It's sweet. You can feel how attached Onii is to his Kin, how much he's loved. As always, wonderfully done.
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  • From wolfluv on August 13, 2008
    I'm not sure what others think but this story may just about have every kind of KINK there is but I must say that it is written with a style and a grace that is unexpected but in such a WONDERFUL WAY!!! I must say you two have out done yourselves in this story alone! It's a real story with heart and soul and it's PERFECT THANK YOU FOR SHARING IT WITH US! I look forward to reading it to it's completion!

    THANK YOU FOR UPDATING
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  • From ANON - alex on August 09, 2008
    wow...u guys are really creative!
    i guess ya'll must be good friends not to get wierd around each other by writting this
    keep up the good work....this is one of my favorite stories to keep up with!!!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on August 08, 2008
    This last chapter was actually kind of sweet ^_^ Very interesting how you're building the story.
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  • From maggiekebs on August 06, 2008
    Very nice.
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  • From pseudohanyou on August 06, 2008
    I don't see what the problem is with Sesshoumaru sharing Kin with Kagura. As a matter of fact, I see it more as him sharing Kagura with Kin. The possession is still there; even moreso because Kin must obey him by pleasing another while simultaneously fighting any possible jealousy and greed to have his Onii to himself.

    Dare I say OH FUCK, yet again?
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  • From TrulyWished on August 05, 2008
    So great. I really can't think of anything else to say, they are wonderful chapters and I was thrilled to see them when I got home from work. Thank you.
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  • From Izzanami on August 05, 2008
    I love this story, it is absolutley one of my favorites. I really like the way you did the threesome, it didn't leave me feeling bad for Kin, or like Onii shouldn't have taken him along, or that he shouldn't have been with Kagura. It was exactly as you said, it seemed to bring the two closer together. Kin is by far my favorite original character that I have ever read in InuYasha fanfiction. I love reading about him, he's so adorable.

    You have done a great job keeping Sessh, very Sessh (I still want to call him Oniisama now in relation to this fic), while writing him with affection, almost obession for little Kin. I can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on August 05, 2008
    Another wonderful segment of Claiming Kin, thanks for the update. I really loved how you handled the threesome. My favorite part being the part where Sesshoumaru is having fucking Kagura and he is imaging it is Kin he is going into...:D really enjoyed that part. The Afterfuck was also loved, how he took Kin in the towel and cuddled him in his bed. I love the contrast.

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  • From ANON - TAYLOR on August 01, 2008
    I hope you will update soon i fucking love this story. Sesh can't let Kagura touch Kin it is so unlike him to share. i want Kin to grow up a little so that the real fun can start...
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  • From ANON - una on July 28, 2008
    i looooooooove this story. please update soon. how old is Kin anyway?
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on July 25, 2008
    Very good. I love the confused Sesshoumaru. It really changes things. I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if Sesshoumaru will really be okay with Kin being with Kagura. Just the thought of Kin and his sisters/brothers gets him mad. Maybe he is trying to cover up his own feelings with letting Kin come with him to see Kagura??? AH To may questions.

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  • From pseudohanyou on July 22, 2008
    Back Review =]

    "Kin Gets the Spank" (love the name of that chap, btw.) Loved the punishment. The way Kin is SO eager and willing to please his Onii-sama is riveting. And the way Sesshoumaru loses control and demands teeth...FUCK, that destroyed me. I love to see his conflict; the way he wants to fall so badly but refuses to do so, save for little slips here and there. HOT.

    "Kin's Reflections" The simplicity of his thought process is wonderful. So very much a child. But his adoration and devotion rival that of an adult, no?

    "Kagura's visit" Again, fucking HOT to see Onii flip out just a little bit. I shuddered when he snapped at Kin. And Kagura is so wonderfully Kagura, as I love to see her depicted: The perfect whore. =] The interaction between her and Sess and his conflicting thoughts between her and Kin was magic.

    PART 2 PLZ.
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  • From ANON - Truly~Wished on July 20, 2008
    So, as I'm trying desperately to write a suitable review and go back to skim a little, the next chapter comes up. Damn, and I'd almost figured out what to say too. basically, I'm not an Inuyasha reader, nor am I shota person. Never have been and probably never really will be. But I will be for you. This is an amazing story, fascinating and easy to read - nine chapters took me a while but it felt like minutes. I especially like the range of emotion you pack into each chapter. I just wanted you to know I'm enjoying it immensely and will be following along from now on.
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