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Reviews for CLAIMING KIN by Salome and Talon

By : salomewilde
  • From Arianawray on April 23, 2010
    I love the superbly intense relationships between Sesshomaru and Tai, and Sesshomaru and Kin. As I read each new chapter as it is posted, I also find myself constantly wondering how Sesshomaru will relate to Kin when the child is older. Will they interact somewhat like Tai and Sesshomaru, always loving each other but with fierce struggles for independence (although to a lesser degree, as you have made it clear that Kin is not an alpha)? Kin can't be the same submissive, utterly adoring little puppy that he is now for the rest of his life. How will Sesshomaru connect with an adult Kin? If Sesshomaru takes a female mate for the sake of having pups, will Kin be neglected? I also wonder if Tai will at any point come to appreciate the beauty and charm of his hanyou son, and if he does, will Sesshomaru be jealous? Oh dear, I see that I've just typed a whole bunch of questions - no, I don't expect answers to them, but it's all just a way of saying that your story makes me think deeply about love and power and changes in relationships, and that it moves me enough to wonder about the characters' futures!
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  • From ANON - Spiralicious on April 15, 2010
    Some comments on Piss Play parts I&II (I haven't read Teru yet)

    I'm winging it because I lost my notes on what I was going to say. Part I: I ended up rereading part of it because I sped through it the first time and got confused (my problem not your guys' writing) but afterwards I had the song "my favorite things" stuck in my head for hours. Interpret that as you will. Part II: I really liked how it went back and forth between the bathing servants and the goings on in the tub. That seemed to give it an extra element of anticipation, or something that made it that much better.
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  • From ANON - caitriona on April 10, 2010
    I think I love little Teru. Poor Pup. In a way, what Kin did was cruel - to see the love and fuck that he shares with Onii-sama. But he was also kind - he shared. Teru is like the broken version of what Kin would have been had Onii not saved him from the bull (and the bull allowed him to live), and I just want to hug him up.

    I also liked the foreshadowing when Sesshoumaru wished for a single servant who could do it all. After all, isn't that what Kin will become?

    Thanks so for sharing
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  • From jennabean on April 07, 2010
    Whew what a chapter! I don't know how you two do it, but you manage incorporate innocence into something that isn't necessarily, well, innocent! Such a wonderful job and it makes for a very good read.

    Great work ladies!!!
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on April 06, 2010
    aww Kin =3
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  • From ANON - natasha on April 06, 2010
    really great chappy poor inu didn't get to sat good-bye but still he can still remember the good time they had.
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  • From myperversities on April 05, 2010
    OMG PLEASE have Sessh buy that pup!!! RIGHT NOW!!! Please don't wait til they're older....make it so that they buy him off his master right then and he doesn't have to leave with him....you did say in the chapter previous that you wanted to get Kin a slave, he may not be female but I think we and Kin like this better. Oh and the things they can do together mmmmmm. Kin can show and introduce Teru to Kini and they all can 'drink'. OMG so much potential!!! I'm so glad you guys are back from your hiatus.
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  • From ANON - Imanewme on April 05, 2010
    "I didn't get to say goodbye..."

    Dawwwwww... that is so darn cute! There's an overall sweetness about the two puppies playing together. I'm elated that little Teru has something good to remember; it seems as if he had forgotten what good things were like.
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  • From Onyxlight on March 30, 2010
    "Onii? Can there be one more gift today?"

    "Have you one in mind, my pet?" he asks, stroking Kin's soft, untangled hair with devoted claws.

    "Yes," he says as he leans into Onii's stroking pets. "Onii's fuck, please?"


    O.o It doesn't get any better than that ladies. Well done as always ^_^

    ~Onyx aka Lynx
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  • From ANON - Jaguars girl85 on March 30, 2010
    This was great! One thing that I would like to see in future is the training of kin.....in all body fluids to only release them when Sessho says he can. I also hope that Kin's "favorite sister" gets the role if Kin's girl pet!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 29, 2010
    aw, pee play :) it's fun to see an exploration of the more animal side of their demon-hoods. and Sesshy's so sweet with Inu, it's like fluffy! or, rather, pee soaked fluff.
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  • From ANON - Imanewme on March 29, 2010
    This story is unique. It's not just about the sex. It's about the dominance and the responsibility of being in charge. It was a little surprising that Sesshoumaru lost himself over Kin's urine, particularly when he has a history of having bodily fluids in his mouth. He muses that Tai's knot may have contributed to his reaction, and I'm looking forward to see how that plays out. How all has Tai's knot changed him, I wonder. It's not hard to draw parallels between the Tai X Sesshoumaru pairing and the Sesshoumaru X Kin pairing. (Like father, like son?) Thank you ladies for another provocative chapter. Caio!
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  • From ANON - moon_maiden36 on March 29, 2010
    ....*blushes horribly*

    XD
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on March 29, 2010
    That last anon review was mine - Caitriona no baka!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 29, 2010
    This chapter was funny. I loved Mizao's discomfort and shock at the relationship between the two brothers. I wonder if this is just an inu thing? One thing I will say, though, is that the constant switching around was a little confusing. Not so much confusing as it sometimes broke the flow a little bit much. Perhaps grouping the Sess/Kin sections a little more and the Yumi/Mizao sections together a little more. Otherwise it's kinda like reading a very very interesting tennis match and you try not to get whiplash. :)

    I also like the Rin forshadowing. I'm looking forward to reading more. I'm greedy, aren't I?
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