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Reviews for CLAIMING KIN by Salome and Talon

By : salomewilde
  • From ANON - Caitriona on March 29, 2010
    I didn't know that y'all had updated! :pouts: I hide out for a few :cough: weeks :cough: and I miss out of my sweet Kin - twice!

    Anyway. While this chapter had urine play (something that I'm not particularly interested in except as a form of power play) in it, it also had something that jumped out at me far more than the little 'kink.' It was the degree in which Sesshoumaru completely and totally relies on the young Inuyasha. When he felt like a beta, he thought about Kin to help him regain his dominant status. When he felt the need for sexual stimulation, he thought of Kin to relieve the need. When he thought about trust issues, he thought about Kin's ultimate trust. When his 'demon self' wanted fear, he used Kin (much to his shigrin). And when Kin showed terror, Sess thought about about Kin's safety and soothing almost over his own allergic reaction. The relationship is symbiotic and this chapter really has shown it. I liked it lots.
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  • From on March 29, 2010
    I am so happy to see you both are adding to this.

    You both always make me smile.

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  • From jennabean on March 29, 2010
    Very awesome, I loved the two scenes playing out at the same time, very intriguing and sexy! I can't wait to read more of this you two, wonderful work yet again!
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  • From ANON - kira on March 29, 2010
    I loved it, Sensei, Miss Talon! The part in the bath where everyone had a bit of fun was a delight to read! I can't wait to see what happenes to the girls in the morning. XD *looking forward to the next chappie*
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  • From ANON - natasha on March 29, 2010
    really great chappie 2 for 1 and they were wonderful just wonderful can't wait for more to come.
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  • From shutterbee on January 11, 2010
    Kin is way too cute for his own good.
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  • From theonlytalonsage on January 09, 2010
    Also Kin would not want to make Onii's belly feel yucky.

    Mmmm...so not eating Kin but licking Kin is a good com...comp...comr...thingie!!
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  • From ANON - natasha on January 07, 2010
    wow great chap it has been a long time since last time you put up a chap but this was just wonderfully put together just loved it so much . i really hope next time won't be so long for the next one to come.
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  • From Knittingknots on January 06, 2010
    now this was a surprising chapter...and good. And Sesshoumaru...growing up? Was worth the waiting for.
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  • From ANON - chinadoll1980 on December 16, 2009
    this fic is very good i have lost a lot of sleep trying to read this fic it is that good i am looking forwered to it getting finished and how thing will turn out with hana and kouga
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on October 08, 2009
    awww poor izayoi =(
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on October 07, 2009
    I love Hana. I just love her to pieces. And Kin is so brave and strong and wonderful. I just love this chapter!!!!
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  • From KitenKaiba on October 07, 2009
    Don’t Give up Hana! Get on Sesshoumaru’s good side! You may still get your wish. Sess will take a mate at some point (far far into the future), and while he is possessive to the max I can’t see him deigning Kin the rite to a family. Failing that… *steals Hana for herself.*

    Love the work keeps it up!

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  • From Knittingknots on October 06, 2009
    What a neat chapter...I love the character interplay between Hana and Kin and Ken, and how kind and protective he is...nice work!
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on September 14, 2009
    awwwwwwwwwww his poor mom i feel bad for her because she really loves her son!!!
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