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Reviews for the fox and the hound

By : desolokitty
  • From kookookitty on June 12, 2008
    rather frightening imagery. very well written, very descriptive

    one thing though. paragraph line breaks... when you change subject, scene, person speaking there should be a new paragraph and a few blank lines between them. it makes it so much easier to read and it makes it prettier too!

    good beginning, looking forward to reading more.

    thank you,
    ginny
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