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Reviews for Comprehendible nonsense in illuminating twilight

By : KitenKaiba
  • From ANON - sma_orlando on December 19, 2014
    Please finish this good story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2008
    i like this story. your writing draws the reader into what, at first, appears to be a simple story. you subtly work in other twists and turns, and before the reader knows what you've done, we are reading a wonderfully complex story.

    i do believe sesshoumaru is acting a little ooc. i don't think either brother would have accepted being forced to be that close.but artistic license allows that for the developement of the story.

    thank you for a wonderful story. i can't wait to see how they manage to get along, throughout the long winter, and with the quirky personalities that you have added with your oc's.
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  • From midnightsweet on July 02, 2008
    ok
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  • From Afrieal on June 30, 2008
    Wow great job we love how you're building the plot. sorry this isn't gonna be a gushy review i'm doing this on a break at work

    Affie
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  • From Afrieal on June 22, 2008
    Interesting story... Af is looking foreward to reading more and I'm curious to see what you're going to do with the "cursed items" hope to read more of your work soon

    Rysha and Affie
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  • From midnightsweet on June 22, 2008
    it getting very good. keep it up.
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  • From Dante1444 on June 16, 2008
    Lol yeah I'd say this story takes place a little out of the way from Inuyasha's everyday life. Good job developing the characters.

    D_
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  • From midnightsweet on June 15, 2008
    different. up-date soon
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  • From dela1 on June 14, 2008
    that was funny and good cant wait for next part
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  • From drcomalfy on June 14, 2008
    lol, I'm excited to see how Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's sharing a room turns out! XD Good job! Looking forward to an update!


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