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Reviews for Harem

By : bookworm810
  • From scarletwitchextreme on July 30, 2008
    hot, hot last chap, u r a very good lemon writer, and u write them so fluently into story that its doesnt seem to much. The story is getting really interesting, and I cant wait to read more. keep chapters rolling.
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  • From SweatyCup on July 28, 2008
    Ya know that I love this story?
    It's bull a few people review(like me)
    But it has a lot of votes to show for it.
    Can't wait for next one.
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  • From SweatyCup on July 12, 2008
    Haha ,I love Rin in your story already!She reminds me of me.
    Update soon.
    ^Dei
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  • From xXBellatrixXx on July 10, 2008
    I love your story!!! Please keep up the good work!
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  • From SweatyCup on July 07, 2008
    Oh so THAT'S who Kikyo was in your story!
    I'm glad you retold that so I know what she was to Inuyasha.^_^Loved it!
    Update soon
    ^Dei
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on July 03, 2008
    hot and sexy thats all I have to say...no. Actually great writing and great flow to the story. I cant wait to see where this one goes, but I love it. and keep it coming...no pun intended...lol
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  • From SweatyCup on July 03, 2008
    It sounds to me like Inuyasha found himself a new favorite.Nice lemon!
    Can't wait for the next update!
    ^Deu
    (P.S. Stop praising me!You're making me blush!)
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  • From gaiaoftheforest on July 02, 2008
    Great story concept! Very new and refreshing, I'm enjoying it so far, but just a quick suggestion; get a beta. Your grammar is ok for the most part, its your spelling and sometimes using the completely wrong word from what you mean I'm just anal about it, but it would make reading your story more enjoyable if I wasn't correcting it in my head.
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  • From NAnderson on July 02, 2008
    What? U only have 1 reviewer???? That SUCKS!!! I was sure u would have tons of reviews!... Thats kinda y i didnt review before lol. Sorry about that!!! But u r doing a great job with this story and i look forward 2 seeing another update. As u can tell im not that good at reviews, but u really r owed more then 1 reviewer 4 a story this great.
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  • From SweatyCup on June 30, 2008
    Aww my heart just fluttered.You're welcome!
    I do love this story .
    It's different and I like different.
    Update soon.
    ^Dei
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  • From freelke on June 30, 2008
    I think your story is very nice. I enjoy reading it alot. thank you for updating so quickly
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  • From rowdygirl on June 29, 2008
    I cannot believe you haven't been getting reviews up the wazoo for this story. It is really good and you have a pretty original presentation! There are some grammatical errors, but on the whole you're doing a very good job. Your character definition is A+, the characters are all very believable. It threw me for a loop when I realized that the setting was more Arabian than Japanese, but that is a nice change. You have me hooked, I want to see where you take this.

    rowdysgirl
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  • From nabikineum on June 29, 2008
    I have completely fallen off on my feedback obligations. Sorry I haven't reviewed this story. Maybe I was waiting until it got farther into the 'plot' and past the 'setup' stage... or maybe it's just time crunch. It's probably both.

    I think you're doing a good job of setting up the characters. Can't wait to see what you do with all that you've set up.
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  • From AngelEvie on June 29, 2008
    Great story. I've never seen one like this, so it's quite refreshing! Keep up the good work!
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  • From Pucedragon on June 29, 2008
    This is really very good! Now you have me wondering, "What did Kikyo do?" Well, I can't wait to find out. Keep up the good work, I want to see where this goes!
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