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Reviews for Heir to the West

By : Narniafreek07
  • From PandaGaara on June 28, 2008
    Nice! I love Kagome's temper! She'd react just like that. I can't wait till your next chapter. Ja ne =^_^=
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  • From snowbird on June 26, 2008
    I just finished reading some of the other reviews and I like the ideas that Legilmyth submitted. They sound exactly like something that I would enjoy reading. My sexual tension idea would fit perfectly with Legilmyth's suggestions. Hope you think about this.
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  • From Legilmyth on June 25, 2008
    Interesting story you have started here. Well I have been thinking about it all day long. And I thought of a few things, whether or not they will work for you is up to you of course. One; Since she insited that Rin and Kohaku are married before he is allowed near her, it gives Sesshomaru a chance to watch how she interacts with his servents and subjects. Once he sees how well she handles herself he will start to respect her. And lets face it, Sessh cannot love someone he does not respect.
    Two; Kagome is stuborn so she isn't going to want to go back on her condition just as a matter of pride. Since she will be afraid that he will reject her. So my thought was that since she is human, even though she is powerful the pup or pupps will need to get their youki from somewhere, and that somewhere is Sesshomaru. So basicly he will have to stay close to her in order to keep both her and the pups healthy. You can learn a lot from someone when your next to them almost 24/7. Especially if she gets sick when ever he leaves her for too long.
    Anyway,hope some of this might help. BUt either way I hope to see more of this story in the future.
    Legilmyth

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  • From InnocentLittleFlower on June 25, 2008
    I Love the stroy. Personaly i think it would be awsome for Sesshomaru to after watching her over a while in her castle end up falling in love with her because of her beauty and lets face it she is no ordinary human, and then threw Sesshomaru showing her Love wich is something kagome wants she would inturn fall for him and they would end up married. But great story so far keep up the good work!
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  • From lovelessjayson on June 25, 2008
    You are sooo ebillllllll leaving a cliff hanger like that *huffs* but that means when you up date it will be even better to read thanks for posting the story and the new chapter...update soon ok
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  • From snowbird on June 25, 2008
    I'm still loving it even more. I think that one request of Kagome's is not going to work. I think once she's been with Sesshoumaru, lost her virginity and has a taste of him and some good hot sex, she's going to forget all about restricting them to breeding ruts. The sexual tension is going to be too strong between them to not give in. They'll feel it in their auras, when they smell each other, look at each other, accidentally touch each other. She will find it very hard and impossible to stick to that rule of hers. Of course for him, he's all for rutting whenever the urge hits sinse he finds himself strongly attracted to her. If you don't have him mark her during their first time together, then have him do it during one of their hot and heavy rutting sessions, but the marking will have to include him for the bond to be complete, especially if that is the way her lifespan is to be extended. Yes, I think sexual tension will be their downfall involving their emotions that includes trust and love. I hope this review will be of some help.
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  • From missy71 on June 25, 2008
    Well these last two chapters that you just put up were great. You have done a great job with the spelling and the word usage. I hopw that you continue this story, can't wait for the next update:)
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  • From snowbird on June 24, 2008
    I am really eager to read this story as it unfolds. If you keep going like you started out, it promises to be a thoroughly delightful story. She's not going to make it easy for him because meek and submissive she is not. He'll find his hands full with her and lively times are ahead in the Western Palace. hahaha. Also, I look forward to their first time together when he takes her as his mate. The old saying, barefoot and pregnant, will be her description now. Since legend has it that she can over time give birth to a hundred pups, it would make sense for her to birth litters instead of one at a time. Even with litters, that poor womb of hers will be screaming "no more!". heehee. Can you imagine, 100 children!!!!! I think I'd just commit suicide and get it over with. haha That brings up another issue. She would have to have a lonnnnng lifespan, too. Are you going to have it given to her by one of the jewels or Sesshoumaru? Anyway, I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I'm excited and eager.
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  • From Panchat on June 24, 2008
    brrrrr, cold... really cold
    poor kags
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  • From PandaGaara on June 24, 2008
    Awesome!! I wonder...how to draw them together...Well knowing Kagome she won't even let Sesshy touch her with him showing her some kind of caring emotion for her. And him using Kohaku and Rin's engagement as bait was a very good touch. Kagome would most likey agree because she wouldn't want them to hate her and be sad.

    But to get Sesshy and Kags liking each other romantically...hmmm >_< *brain explodes*
    @_@ thinking hurts....hope you update soon. Ja ne =^_^=

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  • From Tricia1224 on June 23, 2008
    Very good start. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From PandaGaara on June 23, 2008
    Awesome! Awesome to the max!! I hope you update soon!!
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  • From akashicrecord on June 23, 2008
    hope that you update this one soon... i want to find out what happens next! haven't read one quite like this one. hope that sesshomaru isn't a total dick to kagome, like he was to his estranged mate. only time will tell, right?
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  • From Panchat on June 23, 2008
    interesting XD
    i wonder what that jem does though o.0
    plz keep it up it's very promissing!
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  • From sugar0o on June 23, 2008
    this is a very interesting beginning and i seriously hope you plan to continue and follow through to an end it is a captivating beginning. - r0o
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