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Reviews for The Demon's Ball

By : KPO4
  • From dkwolves on June 29, 2008
    Oooh can't wait for the next chap! Can you please email me when you updated? Thanks. dkwolves@hotmail.com
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  • From missy71 on June 26, 2008
    Like the new chapter, can't wait till the ball actually begins and with that the festivities. I am anxious to see how everyone behaves.
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  • From snowbird on June 26, 2008
    I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Shinji seems like such a dear. Good. I'm glad Sesshoumaru is on edge and hot for Kagome. He'll probably fight it while trying to find excuses to keep other males away from her. Her and Shinji's entrance was delightful. But the best was Inuyasha simply because of what was announced when he came through the doors. I had to absolutely cackle with laughter. I'm surprised Sesshoumaru didn't get choked on his drink. I can't wait for the next update when she comes face to face with Kayashima and he realizes who she is. So will the others when they see his expression and catch on to what it means. Oh boy, I wonder how Sesshoumaru will react. heehee.
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  • From redholland on June 25, 2008
    This story is oh so good... it is so decadent! Please update soon, I can barely wait to see how you play out their first interaction in front of others, and later in private...
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  • From Archfiend on June 25, 2008
    I´m now very impatient to see where this is leading for you seem to have a fine sense of mischief embedded in your story and my anticipatory grin qas huge. The funny thing is Kagome has already practically seduced two taiyoukai,three if you count in Kouga, though he has Ayame. whoa and not even there for two days! pleas show mercy and relieve us of this huge tension your excellent story has created, update!!
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on June 25, 2008
    That's what they do to me. LOL I am just along for the ride. I am getting into the story. Good job.
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  • From Archfiend on June 25, 2008
    Please, please continue this story ASAP. I laughed, had cynical remarks flitting through my head and was breathlessly reading your story. It is absolutely great, I love it,You are excellent the way you write. Though there are a few things bugging me. Sesshoumaru knows Kagome well, he faught with them against Naraku, where are Jaken and Rin? (especially Rin) And how the hell did Kouga get to be a Taiyoukai? Le leads a tribe but he is nowhere as in the same league as a Sesshoumaru. Still... continue I am waiting impaitiently
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  • From snowbird on June 25, 2008
    I liked the first 2 chapters and the plot of the story. I like a strong Kagome. It makes her more equal to the power of Sesshoumaru. Too bad Sango is already paired with Miroku. I think she would go good with Kayashima. She's a warrior, too, and deserves to be paired with a youkai like Kagome. In the anime, I always thought her to be a much stronger character and fighter than Kagome. She was more my ideal of what a warrior priestess should be like. I think the monk's too tame for her. I get tired of them being paired. Maybe you could let Kayashima give Miroku some competition. It would be even better if the monk lost Sango. After all he is a hentai and could easily find solace in the arms of another female. Instead, you probably plan for Kayashima to give Sesshoumaru competition for Kagome. Such a waste of what sounds like a gorgeous dragon demon because we all know he will lose and end up empty armed.
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  • From Anguloce on June 25, 2008
    i'm enjoying this concept, the demon ball is a great idea. can't wait to see how it turns out!
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  • From lovelessjayson on June 25, 2008
    omg I love this story please please up date soon I would love to see how you work this out
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  • From missy71 on June 25, 2008
    Nice new chapter. I can't wait to see what happens at the Ball. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Diamond on June 24, 2008
    Oh no, it is not obvious that this is your first story, it is very very good! It is obvious that you are a talented writer and I hope to read more of your story soon!!!
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  • From sugar0o on June 24, 2008
    very interesting i really hope we don't have to wait long for the next update for this, wonderful job! - r0o
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  • From missy71 on June 24, 2008
    Well I have to say that for your first fanfic it is quite enjoyable. I hope that you continue this fic I would like to see what happens. Hope to see a new chapter. Thanks for the srory.
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  • From sysclp on June 24, 2008
    Not a bad start and I look forward to future chapters. Good job on the writing too, nothing is more annoying than having to wade thru bad spelling, bad grammar, and incorrect word usage, so I really appreciate it when I get to read something lacking those things. Thanks!
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