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Reviews for The Heart Within

By : YoukaiFate
  • From ANON - Merely Truth on July 11, 2011
    Wow, such a good story ! With Sango for once, and Yusuke's crew, I love the mix, the plot was very interesting with lot of confidence, hurt, fun and love, and some special characters !!!

    Thank you ! I'm going to follow immediately in your new story... :D

    A french reader,
    Merely Truth
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  • From ANON - rogue on April 30, 2011
    "Holy shit", indeed. You are a phenomenal writer! I have been reading fanfiction for 11 years, and NEVER have I read any writing so worthy of being published. I usually skip over action scenes, and yours, I could picture entirely, I was so involved. I'm only on chapter 5, and I am ECSTATIC that I have so many more to go! I canNOT wait to see where this heads. I wasn't even a fan of the pairing when I first started! If you haven't already considered it, if you aren't already published...please, please do think about it.

    On to the next! :))
    -rogue
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  • From sutlesarcasm on April 29, 2011
    Hot Damn, I wondered what had happened to you. I have had The Heart Within and Hate the Game on my favorites list for years, hoping someday you would come back and finish them. This chapter is definately "cummin" back with a vengence...LOL. Damn, I quit smoking in September 2010, and now I want a cigarette.
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  • From Silent Pluto on January 15, 2011
    wow, talk about hot and over the top!
    Man, once i started this story I couldn't look at anything
    else! lol update soon k?
    KUDOS!
    ~Silent P
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  • From ANON - Legilmyth on July 18, 2010
    LOl. GO SANGO! I would have cold cocked him too. Okay, absolutly awsome as usual. I can't wait to see how you take it from here.
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  • From ANON - K on July 17, 2010
    I love this story!! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter and I hope that you will update soon. I love how true to character you have made both Hiei and Kurama and I am anxious to see how Sango will take everything now that Hiei has accepted his feelings and Kurama has merged with Youko. I am certain that it will not be a simple thing to regain her trust since they both hurt her badly.
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  • From ANON - Ysi on May 19, 2010
    Yup, I knew it! Awesome fight scenes! And now Kouga knows. I'd like to throttle both Kurama and Hiei myself now grrrrrr. Again your depiction of Sango is always above par. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Ysi on May 03, 2010
    Woot! I didn't think I'd ever be excited with a fight scene, but I am, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ysi on April 25, 2010
    I loved the humor in this chapter and the camaraderie. Poor Jin but I sort of guessed you weren't heading that way. I now can't wait to see what you have next for Sango. A fight? A confrontation? suspense!
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  • From ANON - taixi on April 25, 2010
    wow, you're on an update roll. practically an update every day these past few chapters!

    yes, I was rather disappointed Sango didn't give Jin a chance after all. He's so cute with his wiggling ears and his lighthearted banter to support her when she's down. but I suppose too many paramours would crowd up the story; I honestly wasn't ever expecting him to make a move in the first place. And it makes sense that she would associate his personality too closely with her first love. I love the frustration/confusion Kurama must have felt upon returning to the apartment and finding many rowdy male demons crashing there.
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  • From ANON - Ysi on April 23, 2010
    This is one of the best Sango stories I've ever read! In the years I've been reading InuYasha fanfics, I can only count a few that were really good and had that much heart in it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - taixi on April 22, 2010
    a fairly unexpected but delightful twist. I love that Jin finally made a move and she's receptive! he's the only one who has been honest with himself re: how he feels for her. go jin! (and I'm eagerly awaiting the possible reappearance of Kag/Inuyasha :)
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  • From ANON - Ysi on April 19, 2010
    Hot hot Youko! I am very happy reader with not one but three new chapters and loving every written word. You're still unparalleled. Great work! I am rooting for Kurama! But then both of your characters are hot. hmmmmmm
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  • From ANON - Ysi on April 03, 2010
    I feel for Kurama in this chapter. That he has to sacrifice his love this way. Still I can't wait to read what happens next. Great job!
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  • From ANON - taixi on April 03, 2010
    so, I'm thinking (perhaps wrongly...perhaps just wishful thinking) that all this soul-searching on Kurama's part, and his conclusion that he needs to give up his own chance at happiness in order to give Sango and Hiei a chance together, may actually be dramatically wrong. Maybe this realization that he is willing to give up his chance at happiness is the sacrifice through which he needs to pass in order to eventually come around and realize this happiness (after a great deal more trials, overcoming/outsmarting Yomi, etc). I'm still holding out hope as well that even though Sango isn't permitted to share her name, that somehow Kagome will end up catching wind of her existence and they will be reunited after all. Lovely story, always pleased to find you've updated.
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