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Reviews for Shadows of a past

By : SFP
  • From swasdiva on September 05, 2008
    This fic has completely knocked me off my feet. I'm a fan of the dark-hunter series and always recognized the potential for an IY crossover but didn't know how to go about it. You've penned something beyond my imagination! Your style holds true to Kenyon's voice in the novels, with dry humor and witty, rich description that makes for some nicely detailed nuance and character development. Your pacing is solid and builds a satisfying, engaging story that keeps me on the edge of my seat. You've got Kagome down pat, and your take on Ash is perfection. The latest chapter ripped my heart to pieces, but if there's anyone who can empathize with Kagome it's Ash. Based on the chance for compassion, you made a great pairing choice. It'll be nice to see an honest, abiding love grow along side their passion.

    My only nitpick is a few grammatical errors in spelling and word choice, but I can gloss over it in favor of the impressive story line and your writing style. I'm quite smitten with this fic. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Shadednight on September 04, 2008
    OMG!!!! im a big fan of the dark hunter series and you have done it a great justice in your story!!! I love Ash he is suck a sad chartor in the books....i always wanted his to find his soal mate.. the poor guy deserves it after all the shit artmis puts his through the bitch... sorry venting... anyways that its Kags is GREAT!! i love your cross over!! please keep up the great work!! ...oh one more thing... as a favor .. is there anyway you can some way, some how, have Kags beat the ever living hell out of Artmis... that would so make my day.. ^^
    i know she cant die so a good beating is okay.. evil grin... im sure than one person would pay to see that... namly a certain daughter like demon with a ketchup fetish... XD
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  • From ANON - Raven on September 04, 2008
    ......... *covers mouth with one hand and types with the other* poor poor shippo.... nasty ass human. please update soon though cuz other then this last chapter which made me feel sick to my stomach i really like your story so far.
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  • From Mircea on September 02, 2008
    Gotta say I'm really liking this Sara. Way to go lil sis!
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  • From ANON - Sacred hime on September 01, 2008
    yay update! been looking forward to this! update again. By the way read Ash's book so sad!
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  • From MisaRalmeceo on August 23, 2008
    Oh wow I love this story. two of my favorite things inuyasha and dark hunters! I love it!!! I hope things go well with your family. smiles
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  • From ANON - saiyajin princess on August 22, 2008
    wow.. i read the other one.. and holy green gaucamole... i have ash's book, one word, yummy. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Raven on August 12, 2008
    alright I'll be the first to asmit that I know nothing of the Dark-Hunter stuff but dddddaaaammmnnnn I like this, totally cool. this was awesome, please update soon.

    Raven
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2008
    OMG it's the best book in the world i cried for like 30mins i was so happy it was here. Its so worth the money. I'm nearly finished and OMG OMG its definatly her best work so far.
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  • From ANON - Usagi-chan on August 03, 2008
    I love it!!! I love that someone actually put together my two favorite series! You are doing an amazing job,please keep writing.I had a quick question though.....will you bring Simi in? I love your other stories too by the way! I cant wait to read about what happens next! ^.^
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  • From ANON - yusukekuramagirl on August 01, 2008
    i can just see kagome repimanding dev and him just standing there in shock. as for ash's reaction the papa that caught; ash is acting like a jealous boyfriend. i can't wait for the chapter where he actually talks to her. i want to see that chemistry, that is i have a feeling is going to be explosive. as for her nickname of 'lil' bit', i love it. especially since i am only 5'2". update soon. i would like to read some more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2008
    Hey i'm 5 foot 2 and i'm not short i'm just petite. Yay more InuYasha Dark-Hunter goodness. Update soon.
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