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Reviews for Vacation

By : chicke222
  • From madmiko on August 02, 2019

    This looks like a promising beginning.  I know it has been years since you updated, but I hope you will come back to this and finish it!


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  • From Seloa on April 13, 2009
    I'll offer myself up as a beta if Your still in need of one. drop me an email.
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  • From loretta537 on September 15, 2008
    this is a good story so far, i hope you update it soon. is this on any other sites...maybe ones that have auto notification when it's updated?
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  • From poeticpunkrocker92 on August 23, 2008
    I love this fanfic! The only thing that sucks about it though is the grammar and spelling errors you have in it. If you don't start checking your work before posting your fanfic will not be great at all...it isn't now, but it could be really great. Just look over your work before posting and everything will be great.^^ Update soon. Thanks.
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  • From swasdiva on August 07, 2008
    I really like it so far. It's sweet and romantic already, and the two groups haven't even met yet! @_@ *subliminal message - KurKags 4eVA!!!* @_@ I'm excited to read more.
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  • From SakuraMaxwellMinamino on August 07, 2008
    ooohhh i hope you update this one soon. so very intruiguing. lol. hope to see more.
    Ja
    Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
    Eternity
    Sakura Dimentia Winner
    Sinopa Ariyaana
    YokoSakura
    Meiinu Inuraku Hiisho Ryuu Asai
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