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Reviews for Undone

By : Saraluna
  • From Rainbowchid on March 23, 2015
    I really like this, it's very unique. I love the raw passion between kagome and inuyasha! Please keep posting!
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  • From ANON - Kn on October 07, 2013
    Ugh!! I went to push my little finger on the next chapter button and there was none!!!! What will I do???
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  • From angiepsaenz on January 03, 2011
    I like this story! I bookmarked it a while back but did not read until a couple of days ago b/c of work and school. But I agree with the reviewer before me, COMPLETE this story, it IS really sad when stories go unfinished for a long time, not to mention the suspense they leave us in.
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  • From guardiankeren on August 04, 2010
    This fanfic is wonderful. I have read fanfictions for a while now and it makes me sad when I come across stories this good and they remain unfinished for years. PLEASE COMPLETE IT.
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  • From nikkcsim on April 18, 2010
    this story is just FANTASIC. i love how everything is realistic and not all lovey-dovey right away, like i see in so many other stories. PLEASE update as soon as you can. i'd love to see what happens next.
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  • From kirabates on March 08, 2010
    love it so far and totally wanna see what happens next. update please!! tanks
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  • From JLucPitard on October 29, 2009
    Very good story. I like the triangle (or quadrangle if we include Hojo... but I doubt we will for long) and I love the last chapter's insights into Kagome and Inuyasha. Methinks Sessh won't take it well when he realizes who she really wants, but I'm sure it will be a fun story to get through all the frustration and confusion of people (youkai?) who don't always adhere to honesty in their emotions.
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  • From AlmondGreenEyes on August 17, 2009
    Please continue writing this story!!!
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  • From kookookitty on November 12, 2008
    quite amused at the assumption sesshoumaru made when she sported a whole body blush at her surprise at seeing a white haired man in her living room instead of sango while she was in nothing but a towel. quite a typical male belief, 'i'm wonderful therefore she wants me'. i'm still laughing about that. one doesn't understand why he didn't hear her say 'inu yasha' unless it was selective delusional hearing.

    yasha just seems angry and assumes that no one will accept/like/approve him so why bother attempting at a first impression or behaving at all. his behavior is purely is 'stick it to them before they get into range to stick it to him'.

    ♥most enjoyable, thank you.
    ginny
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  • From Vyper on November 12, 2008
    Poor Sess, he is being a gentleman and Kagome isn't seeing it. Inuyasha is a pain in the ass, but I love him so keep going.
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  • From Saraluna on October 09, 2008
    Glad you like it! Sorry, I don't mean to hold chapters "hostage", I only meant that reviews are often the spark of encouragement I need to start or finish a new chapter. :)
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  • From cukid9 on September 12, 2008
    Normally, I don't review a story when the author holds chapters...hostage, so to speak. Unfortunately (or, perhaps, fortunately), after reading your first two chapters, I'm not sure there's any way I could not leave a review. I'm terribly interested to see where you are going to take this and just how long it will last, especially since these first two chapters have put the characters together very quickly. I was afraid this would be a Sess/Kag story, despite the pairing on your summary, because of the way Inuyasha is introduced (while not completely adverse to the pairing, I have to admit I am sort of a...traditionalist and like my Inu/Kags). But the situation you have set up as my curiosity piqued. Sess already thinking of dating/marrying Kags? Inu already trying to get into her pants? Very interested in seeing how this all plays out.

    I won't beg or plead for an update, but if your story continues as brilliantly as it had started, then I will certainly keep reading and reviewing.

    ~cu-kid
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  • From MiharuKawashi on September 07, 2008
    Interesting start. I hope you continue the story and I look forward to reading more of your work. Ja ne!
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  • From Saraluna on August 13, 2008
    thanks :)

    better spacing added. Hope it looks nicer now.
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  • From kookookitty on August 13, 2008
    goodness! you are a wonderful author!

    when i saw the lack of line breaks i was reluctant to read it. please go back and add a few more spaces between your paragraphs so that it will be prettier and so much more easy to read. most readers see what looks like one long paragraph and instantly think that they will encounter all sorts of bad writing so when i read this piece i was pleasantly surprised at such eloquence.

    i will be looking forward to reading more.

    ♣ thank you ♣
    ginny
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