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Reviews for I am the Moon

By : AmandaBMor
  • From AmandaBMor on March 03, 2009
    Merely Truth,

    I have posted the sequel to this story at mediaminer.org and fanfiction.net if you are interested. The name is, 'The Heirs Apparent'. I can send over the first few chapters in French if you wish...

    Let me know...

    my email is aimeeben1017@hotmail.com

    Thanks for the reviews!~

    Marie Morgan
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  • From Reymond on March 03, 2009
    YESSS !! I like the end. That’s not too much, and not not enough, just perfectly balanced. Sure, there are some characters left on the side but there were a lot of males around Asuna … !!! I’m not desappointed.
    THANK YOU for your story, it was a true pleasure to read it !
    I can check a translation of a chapter whenever you want…

    Your french reader,
    A bientôt !

    Merely Truth


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  • From AmandaBMor on February 21, 2009
    Merely Truth,

    I try to catch the mistakes and I know. I am embarresed to say...I am dyslexic and when I get to the point where the words run together...like I said I do try. I have asked around for a beta but they are hard to get. Media Miner dot org is another place if you would like to see it there, under the same name. Thanks for the reviews.

    MarieMorg
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  • From Reymond on February 21, 2009
    Waow ! I haven’t finish yet to read all the updated chapters of your story, but I want to say you how fantastic I find it ! At each turn something arrives incredible, a lot of hot sex, a lot of drama, and a lot of so little details described, little pieces of normal life well done, very human, and suddenly ! chaos, war, sex, adventures… And Asuna is truly a aweful character (my thoughts, while reading, about her, sometimes : “Nooo, she IS NOT going to do that ...?? … Auw, yes, she IS !!!...”)
    Actually, I’m wondering if you’re not a chess master … ???

    Well your story is one of the more fabulous I ever read, (and I read a lot !). The only problem is there are a lot of mistakes that even me, being french, can see. I suppose some reader are annoyed and stop to read…. Are you updating on other sites ? I suppose yes, and hope you get more reviews than on AFF. What a pity !!!

    Thank you for this story !
    Be courageous to write a beautiful end (and not rushed, pleeeaaase !).

    Your french reader,

    Merely Truth

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  • From Reymond on January 26, 2009
    Yes, I can try it. But you’ll have to wait a little bit, I’m only reading chapter 78 yet, and I’m making pauses sometimes in the story…
    I like how the characters are often acting very natural (casual occasions, with children, …) and I admire the big big web you’re knitting !

    Your french reader
    A bientôt

    Merely Truth

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  • From Reymond on January 22, 2009
    Hello ! I’m a french (excuse my english please) mother and reader and Inuyasha’s fan since several years ; I did read a lot of fanfics in english when I discovered there were such good stories, a lot more than in french (what a pity !). AND I’m so glad I eventually succeed in reviewing a story where “you’ve to be logged in to review”. To do that, it was a little difficult for me, french woman, to understand all the bla bla bla, and I had to ask help…

    Well now I can say you that I totally agree with Calix of heaven’s review : your story is FABULOUS, Asuna being an incredible beautiful major character. You have splendidly mixed a woman in human way, a ruler as they have to bee, and a female dog. The result is very good, the other characters are all aweful, and the story, so good lemons with a good plot ! … sometimes I think “Noooo, she didn’t…..” but “yes, she did” and that’s running, and catching my soul, and I’m not tired of it ! How are you managing such a plot ?

    I haven’t read all the chapters yet, but I’m glad to say you THANK YOU for this story. Keep going, and if you post it on another place, care to put the text all in the screen (I have to copy on my computer to read). For the lack of spaces, well, I use my computer to read in big, that’s not a problem. Did you read Inuyoukai8 stories ? I hope others will read your story and you’ll got reviews that you deserved !

    Bonjour de la France,

    Merely Truth


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  • From Fourshotchild on January 15, 2009
    Your summary caught my attention and when I went
    to read your long story, but there are no spaces.
    I can't really look past that. Words just blend
    together and I can see that many other people
    are on my level, so....

    If you do want to put spaces between your para-
    graphs then all you have to do is this:

    < p > - this will seperate paragraphs by spaces.
    < br > - this will just start on another line.
    < b > - this will make bold words.
    < i > - this will make itallic words.

    I hope this helps, and when you do get some
    spaces up on your story, I'd love to read what
    you have down. Like I said, the summary hooked
    me. Good luck with everything!
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  • From AmandaBMor on January 07, 2009
    Dark Mystic...

    By all means barf. If it makes you sick then I suggest you do not read. I shall not fall to pieces when you spew. Have a lovely year.
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  • From LyeLye on January 07, 2009
    Well i hate to say this but I hate the first person point of veiw, third person is alot better. X.x First person just makes me want to barf...
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  • From ShouraiChan on December 18, 2008
    Okay, I don't know what took me so long to get into this story, but I am DEFINITELY hoping you update soon! Hell, for all of your hard work on it, you should have SO many more reviews! I'll be waiting for an update! X3
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  • From Calix on November 12, 2008
    Count this as about forty reviews because you deserve them. I will admit I hardly ever read outside of my favorite pairings but this fic was worth it. My only regret is that it remains unfinished. If I wrote about thrity some chapters without reviews I would stop as well. Curently I'm writing a crossover with my own novel that will never make it to the internet. It is disapointing to do all that work and get little fanfair for it.
    Asuna is a strong female character with an independent mind and actions. Few people rarely write such strong females characters,I suppose because they don't want them to come out as sluts. I hate double standards. I am hopeing my small review will give you the urge to finish this story or at least that Naraku cliffhanger.
    Thank you for the fun read.
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