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By : emmaren
  • From blue_heron on February 26, 2017

    I've been enjoying my relaxing weekend by reading your well-conceived stories. Having just recently finished YBR, I have thoroughly enjoyed the start to this piece as well. I'm truly sorry that it is not being continued (seeing that the last updated was an age ago), but I also want to share how appreciative I am to read stories like this that are so well-written. It is clear that you take time to consider and capture the emotional underpinnings that guide each of us in our courses of actions. That extra effort is the difference between the good stories and the great. Would I love for this continue? Of course! If not, also know your work continues to be appreciated. Best ~


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2015
    A www heartbreakingly sweet.
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  • From ANON - Raj on October 31, 2015
    I'm loving Sesh more and more. Especially how he sees her and accepts her flawed self fully...how beautiful. Xoxo
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2015
    This chapter was so much fun to read!! I empathize with everyone and I love the chemistry between sesh and Kagome !!! Sesh is witty and wise haha
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2015
    Wow my heart skipped a beat right there at the end!!! Amaaazing!!!
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  • From ANON - Raj on October 31, 2015
    Wow I have so much respect for Kagome... She is amazing ...but I also feel so sad for her and proud of her for standing up for herself. Still want Sesh and her to be together - despite how much of an ass he's being lol I love how realistic and authentic Kagome and Sesh feelings and reactions are!!! Thanks for writing! Don't know who Nori is... A sea creature of some sort maybe ?
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  • From ANON - Raj on October 31, 2015
    Oooooh! Chapter 6 was so exciting!!!! Poor Kagome has so little idea of what is truly going on. I can't wait to see how she takes it! Great showdown/ youkai cat fight btw 😃
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  • From ANON - Raj on October 30, 2015
    This is getting better and better! So well written and looooving the dynamic between Sesh and Kagome.i love how u r not rushing this but making it a slow boil - my fav type! Also adored how Sesh was able to give Kagome exactly what she needed in his own way.
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  • From ANON - Raj on October 30, 2015
    Sad circumstances but love this story so far and love your writing style . What a pleasant surprise this fic is! A hidden gem ;)
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  • From ANON - Trice on September 15, 2011
    I just wanted to let you know I love reading your work and you are greatly missed. I know real life issues occur that take priority over your writing but I hope that you will soon start up again. Until then I will be re-reading the work you have already blessed us with. Take care and God Bless. I pray that all is well with you and yours.

    Trice
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  • From ANON - Belladonna on October 11, 2009
    I really enjoyed this story, I do hope you continue it very soon. I very much enjoyed the way you captured Japanese customs so well in your writeings, even the small nuances such as the way a guest's shoes would be in anothers home, the speech patters, ect. I also liked the way you made their attraction grow over time, eah chapter uncovered just a little bit more...I hope you add more soon, I'm interested in how the Kitsune is going to through a wrench into these lover's mist.
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  • From ANON - Danielle on March 08, 2009
    this is one of the best modern AU i've read in a while. you kept the characters personalities wonderfully. I can't wait to read the rest of it!
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  • From Alpine02 on February 28, 2009
    I read Yellow Brick Road and I loved it so I thought I would check this one out too. You do NOT disappoint. I was enraptured the moment I started this one. I can't wait to see where it goes. The dynamic of the pack is just awesome and I love that there is a bit of angst happening. Hope to see more soon
    Alpine
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  • From Auraki on January 29, 2009
    You have been nominated at The Readers Have Chosen! Each week readers and authors alike select their favorite fanfiction to recommend for the Weekly Recommendation Poll, and your story has been added to our Poll! The voting will end on Saturday at midnight (PST), and the results will be published on the main website on Sunday. Thank you for sharing with us and good luck!

    Visit our forum to make your own recommendations or to just to read good fiction.

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 28, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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