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Reviews for Sinful Seduction

By : Akumi
  • From JenLazar on October 05, 2008
    Extremely intense. I didn't like the whole thing happening in a dank and dirty alley though. I feel even Seeshoumaru in his animalistic form would have more class than that. Many people get off on rough sex (and I like it too) but a rusty trash infested dumpster just doesn't do it for me. Others may think otherwise...The point you were striving for was accomplished. The writing style was extremely good and it flowed perfectly. Your discriptiveness was well written and not overdone. I could feel his anger and possessive nature to punish her for what he saw as a betrayal pour out in waves, as well as hers knowing he wouldn't listen to an explaination in his state of mind and that it probably wouldn't make a difference if she tried. She loves him deeply and she can't can't get beyond what he does to her and for her. No matter what she is his and he isn't likely to let her go until HE is ready. Nobody ever said love was easy. I give you credit on a very good first lemon. I hope to be reading more in the future. It looks to be very promising... JEN
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