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By : VFSNAKE
  • From caliha on October 16, 2008
    Sorry but this story is HORRIBLE. I don't even know where to start...
    the setup is bad, how Kagome goes to fighting to complete acceptance in a matter of sentences...? what IS this??
    At the very least try getting someone to look over it for you. Lots of typos. For example, I believe the word is 'penance' not 'pendence' or whatever you put.
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  • From ANON - You don't need to know on October 16, 2008
    Really nice. different kind of story. really like it.


    PS: just one request: please don't let inuyasha "share" kagome with anybody else/male (don't know why, but the thought of other guys dicks in kagome is a major turnoff for me)
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  • From L0VER on October 16, 2008
    wow ... her MOM? and getting her pregnant? i sense a plot here. ? i hope so. .cause i already know that inu's attitude is getting on my nerves. ARGH i can't believe it. but all the lemon stuff, i can deal with it.i've read worse. continue:)
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  • From hanyoufan on October 16, 2008
    I commend you for going somewhere different with this...it's definitely unconventional, which can be controversial sometimes and will always get some people worked up, but the best ones are sometimes the most risque ones. I wonder, however, if you're going to go somewhere...happier with this story. If not, it may work better being posted under "Darkfics." Anyway, kudos for originality!
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  • From ShouraiChan on October 16, 2008
    *EXPLODES* INUYASHA YOU @&@#^*&^#P^&*P#^!&^#&*^*&^#*&!(^#(!^&#*&^%!$%~#$^%~@$%^$~O)*@^&(~&@(~&)~&(#~%%^~#$%@#~$*%^#$^%$~%^$@~%^$@%(*~@*)....

    *takes deep breath*

    @*#@&^@%#%$@%^!$*!%^^!%*^%!(^!^!&^!&%!^!%^#)!*)!)!()!*@^~$#@~#~GHJDLGYTI@R**!)_(@!+(~)~__)&*@&*%^@&~IOP)~!&^~&$~@~#$!(P*~)_(!#@$@$%!)*!~

    *exhales*


    Whew...I feel better now, lol. I cannot believe Inuyasha is SO cold to Kagome! His logic makes NO sense; he'll torture Kagome, but he'll do it with her mom and try and impregnante her? Like it's the most natural thing in the world??!?!?!?!? GOD, I hope Inuyasha comes to his senses!!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, lol!

    (PS: Pretty name you have for Kagome's mom ^_^)
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  • From ANON - sunset in love on October 16, 2008
    distrubing... way out of the picture, it's good to have your ideas but perhaps i can suggest you some 're-plotting', you see, Inuyasha is not that bad, clueless maybe but totally not heartless and Kagome is just a sweet girl, by the way their companion are totally not stupid, protective of Kagome even, but still, it's your plot... you own the plot, did you not?....
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  • From Yamizenchou on October 15, 2008
    Works for me I guess. Maybe a sequel chapter of Kagome having to service Miroku like Inuyasha mentioned?
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  • From MissMarilyn69 on October 15, 2008
    way ooc, its almost like demons had possesed them, the demon of extreme ooc.
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  • From ShouraiChan on October 14, 2008
    Ida know...I mean, I love the whole Inu-Dominating thing, but only if Kagome is admitting that she enjoys to certain extents. Otherwise, I'd rate it pretty good...it's just a little disturbing to see Inuyasha so sadistically cruel and Kagome not enjoying it as opposed to if he was being sadistically cruel and she DID enjoy it. Good job nonetheless!
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  • From lafemxtina on October 14, 2008
    Pretty disturbing
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  • From L0VER on October 13, 2008
    Everything seems swell. Im interested in what you have planned, though it sucks to see Inu so ... MEAN ( I know.. sucha stupid word to describe it) but yeah.. I'm curious. One suggestion .. I don't know .. but maybe its the whole "whore" talk, it sometimes get cheesy. but other than that, good. aaha
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