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By : VFSNAKE
  • From ANON - KTlovesmoney on March 17, 2016
    On one line about half way to Two-thirds of the way down in Chapter 4 Inuyasha become Naruto, just so you know, Exc.
    ("We know. In fact...why don't the three of us take on together. Give Ayame-chan here a chance to see what this world has to offer," said Naruto, as he felt Ayame's hand move to his cock already rising, and her helping him stand at attention again.)
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  • From CherryFlavored on October 18, 2011
    I seriously disliked this. Grammatical errors left and right. You don't know the difference between they're, there, and their. The story is also something I honestly dislike. I only made it to the second chapter when Inuyasha went for Kagome's mother and I just had to stop reading. I can't stand reading that kind of story. And that's not your fault, it's mine. You can write your story however you want to, but I felt like you definitely crossed a line. I didn't like it, I'm sorry.
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on October 10, 2011
    I am speechless. This is perfect, so perfect...
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  • From aherohasfallen on December 26, 2010
    You need to tag your story properly. It's definately OOC and a DarkFic. And it sucks. Sorry for the flame.
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on December 26, 2010
    holy f#ing sh*! how come i´ve never seen this before? it´s perfect! kagome finally gets punished for her abusing inu in the best way, and even ayame gets her revenge - and a guy who knows her worth to boot! the thought of adding sango/kagome´s annoying friends is promising, heck make miroku watch how inu screws sango so the lecher finally learns what a woman truly needs ;-) plus being the proud warrior she is, sango is more in inus+ayames league anyway.....however, what truly knocks me of my feet is kagome´s mom - poor woman sees way too little action - and the thought of her getting knocked up by inu. i can already see kagome babysitting the little one while her mom+inu work on the next XD and who knows, if she continues to be a good girl she might be allowed to carry as well..
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  • From ANON - Just trying to help on December 25, 2010
    Decently okay fic, just a few things I would suggest. The first is please label it as OOC, I know a lot of people would like to be warned of such before going into reading a fic, espcially one that's to this extreme. The second is, perhaps this "Inuyasha/Kagome" is not the right location for this fic. Either Male/Female in general, or Threesomes/Moresomes would be better. I'm not sure what the other three chapters were like, but these are just suggestions that may help your readers and for getting you better reviews as well.
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  • From Takai153 on March 04, 2010
    Nice fic! I love the idea of Inuyasha making Kagome his bitch! Also like that Inuyasha is getting additional tail, too. Kagome's mom was great, I do so love milfs. And Ayame is nice change, don't see her too often. Hope a threesome between Ayame, Inuyasha, and Kagome will come soon. Though I do want Ayame to get some one on one time with Inuyasha as well. However, I find the sex scenes to be a little short.

    Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
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  • From ANON - James on February 14, 2010
    WOW, SO OUT OF CHARACTER ITS TERRIBLE.

    And who cares?

    Sango is just as bitchy towards Miroku you dumbass.
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  • From ANON - Hummm on October 23, 2008
    If you are going to portray them completely out of character then Please label it as such. Its not too hard to put OC, it just isn't. I hate it when I go into a story and it turns out they are completely different from the movies or manga...happens all the with Sesshoumaru and Kagome fics the next thing you know he is some mushy gushy guy, drives me insane. Nice structure and style on writting though.
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  • From Pinkney on October 23, 2008
    I love it man. Its great!

    I agree with you 100% that Kagome had it coming. She's a bitch. Please add Sango. That would be hot!

    This is also a good for way for Naruto to get revenge from Sakura for being a bitch to him. That's if you plan to write a another Naruto fic. (I hope so.)

    By the way I have a new story up. Chapter 1 is out and I'm working or chapter 2 which hopefully I should have up real soon. Its called Naruto and Hinata's Harem. Please check it out when you have the time.

    I also may put it on fanfiction.net but I'm not sure at the moment.


    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - jkbtb on October 22, 2008
    I am only posting a review because of your AN I don't know how many women would put up with a man constantly belittling them and not have some form of retaliation. I have no idea if you are male or female but it seems as if you don't believe in a woman defending herself. If any man did to me as InuYasha did to Kagome I would give him a lot worse than a sit. He would be lucky to leave with his manhood still intact. Mental abuse is just as bad as physical if not more so.
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  • From ANON - You don't need to know on October 22, 2008
    Awesome. hope a M/F/F threesome is coming up(there aren't enough of that kind). maybe inuyasha could "break-in" Ayame and start building a harem^^. Anyway same request as last time please DON'T let inuyasha "share" his bitch(es) with anybody male. Seriously PLEASE.
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  • From ANON - NOT HAPPY on October 22, 2008
    I am writing this NOT as a FLAME BUT as a inform; I f watched the movies and read the manga, you would know that Kagome had attempted more than once to try to take off the ROSARY and that it was broken off at least once so the statement that she never thought about if or tried to take it off is undeniably incorrect.
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  • From Yamizenchou on October 19, 2008
    I'm glad you wrote another chapter for this instead of leaving it a one-shot. Although not what I expected, it was still quite well done. Yes Mrs. Higurashi is a MILF and yet never seems to get laid. Poor woman. Keep writing please. And I'm really curious to see what else you have in store for your readers.
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  • From IYLuv on October 18, 2008
    i don't like the fact that inuyasha is more into kagome's mom than kagome herself. it's like it's defeating the purpose of it being a kagome/inuyasha fic. i'm just hoping that kagome's mom loses the baby and she doesn't become inuyasha's mate...(sigh) i hope it doesn't end with inuyasha not being with kagome as her mate. good story tho
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