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Reviews for The Black Dog

By : Fourshotchild
  • From angel23 on November 02, 2020

    A sequel please


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  • From lara5170 on October 27, 2010
    I finally found the rest of this story on this site. I finally got to read the end & I cried my eyes out.
    But it was great.....

    Thank you for a wonderful story.

    Inuyasha turned out to be a real piece of shit & I hope he suffered a hellish, lonely, miserable life for as long as he lived.




















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  • From ANON - Shinju on September 14, 2010
    So beautiful
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  • From Kittyb78 on September 10, 2010
    Congratulations on your Dokou nomination! XD Great story.
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  • From VeritasGirl on September 09, 2009
    I just finished reading your story, and I just wanted to say that I enjoyed it immensly. You are a very talented writer, and I do hope that one day you will create a sequel to this story!
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on September 09, 2009
    ITS GREAT THAT SHE FOUND HAPPYNESS AFTER ALL SHE'S BEEN THROUGH. BUT WHAT HAPPENS AFTER? DOES SHE TELL HER FAMILY, SOUTA WILL BE DEVISTATED AT THE SAME TIME HE'LL BE SO HAPPY! (LOSS A BEST FRIEND AND GAIN A SISTER) WHAT WILL HER TRIALS BE WITH SESSHOMARU, DID HE EVER HAVE A MATE (DUE TO DUTY?) DOES THE WESTERN LANDS STILL EXSIST? OKAY... TOO MANY QUESTIONS... LOL

    OVERALL I LOVED THIS STORY! WHENEVER YOU UPDATED I FOUND MYSELF WISHIG YOU'D CONTINUE. IF YOU EVER WRITE A SEQUEL, I'LL LOVE EVERY MINUTE OF IT!

    GOOD LUCK!
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  • From ANON - AyameTaylor on September 09, 2009
    I will apologize now for not reviewing any of your chapters.. I am a late comer to this fic.

    Since I knew the ending was drawing near I thought i would give you a nice long review instead of breaking it up and posting the same things over and over again.

    I will say, very very very well written. I am not a big fan of Kagome/Sesshoumaru fics, and to be honest, i wasn't really going to read this one, until my friend sent me the link for it. Wow was I pleased that i did read it. Looking back now, I am thinking i am a fool for not even considering looking at the Kagome/Sesshoumaru fics. I would have misses out on this wonderful piece of work.

    Your writing talent is amazing, I am envious, and i wish I could have a story come out the way i wanted it to.. never mind actually finish one.

    I loved your wordings, and your idea for the story. a very nice ending to the story, and i sincerely wish to see a squeal. However, the way this story ended, I think it could also be left as it.

    This has to be my favorite Inuyasha fanfic ever written, which says a lot. You deserve to have the best cannon for this story. AND you have my vote!

    Now that i have read this story, I am going to definitely look through your other ones! For sure.

    Alas, the only thing I have to say, is for the last few chapters, I noticed that your spelling and grammar slid a tad, but this could be out of your wish to get it posted for us readers. Just a word of caution, it's not a good habit to get in to. Remember, that a story's end is just as important as the beginning. So Grammar and Spelling are a must have.

    That being said, I found no flaws in the characters portrails(sp?), in fact they where so well done I could have sworn this was written by the creator them self. Very Very Very good job.

    And Many thanks for sharing this story with all of us. You have earned my respect as both a reader and an author alike. I sincerely wish that you continue with your creative writings, and I hope that you have a career out of this. Because you would do well.

    Best wishes for your health and happiness

    ~Ayame~
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  • From Legilmyth on September 08, 2009
    What an excelent ending. The whole story was beautiful. Thank you so much for finishing it up.
    Legilmyth
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  • From ANON - Neo-Crystal on September 08, 2009
    Awww.It ended. You have to make a sequel!! Kagome choosing to be in dog form when pregnant! lol. that wuld be funny for sesshy to try to explain. Could you email me when you post a sequal?
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  • From dragongirlcv on September 08, 2009
    ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!! you CAN'T leave it there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHH!!!! at least make a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Serenite on September 08, 2009
    Love the story, especially the fact that Sesshomaru had to actually take TIME to come to terms with his feelings. Makes him that much more in character. I think my only gripe is that Kagome up and left with him at the end, without a word to her family. In other words, now the daughter AND the dog are missing. Seemed a little...loose string-ish? Other than that, wonderfully done!
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  • From MourningRaven on September 07, 2009
    You were right! I didn't expect you to update so soon! But I am happy you did! That was a great chapter! Please update soon again! I do hope this will have a happy ending!!!
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  • From ANON - sunset in love on September 07, 2009
    please update soon, it's killing me wanting to know what will happened to kaggie, poor girl... by the way, inuyasha deserve to be punched and kicked and rolled over by a steamroll... better yet, make him regret his unjust decision and action severely, make him weep wishing kaggie is there, and please make him realised what an ignorant fool he was for the past years associating with the dead proestess...please, and make the the chapter extra long... better yet, till its done... uh so demanding, see what you make me do.... still, please update soon...
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  • From Femaletengu on September 07, 2009
    Wow that's a really sad ending. But at lest there is some hope he'll see her again. D:

    Once again nice and amazing work~
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  • From ANON - evilpinatag on September 07, 2009
    Oh shit, how is she going to do it in the future? How will they know it's her?
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