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Reviews for After the Jewel Disappears

By : Crysan
  • From angel23 on September 28, 2019

    Please update soon


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  • From kathochan on September 04, 2010
    update soon
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 18, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Fourshotchild on October 17, 2008
    I read all of your chapters, but I'm constantly
    destracted by the characters. Sesshomaru is completely
    out of character. I can't truly believe or connect
    with the story due to this reason. Also, I would
    suggest elaborating on actions, scenery, and the characters
    other than dialouge. The story line is a good one.
    I think you can make it work with a little editting.
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