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Reviews for A Grudging Loss

By : osherry
  • From ShouraiChan on February 28, 2009
    #1: You didn’t seriously think that I was going to let my characters have sex and not talk about birth control, did you?

    You are INCREDIBLY wise AND smart, lol! I know bc is the LAST thing on people's mind when they write a fanfic, but it does as a sense of realism! And I know what you mean by "I didn't mean to write the lemon, it just sort of happen" rotflmao! I laughed SO hard! Keep up the great work, hon!!!! Very good job and I'm glad you like HHNF! (Now, the horrible inu in TYFH? Oh, trust me, this next chapter that gets posted--is so dedicated to you, lol!)
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  • From Alpine02 on February 27, 2009
    Arigato!!!! ARIGATO Ai Kisugi-chan!! You thought I was happy before... Well you should now know that I am at the pinnacle of my bliss now that you have put forth the lemon....(Deep Bow) You truly are my favorite writer right now. I am obviously not your beta but I would agree that it really did need to be kind of fluffy for the 1st lemon, it makes for the best possible solution after such a situation. I am really hoping you will be adding something a little bit more 'dominent' for the other lemon. I think that would add something kind of spicy to the fluff that I have just experienced. As always, I check every few days for your updates and I always look forward to them. I am actually writing a story of my own because you have inspired me. I haven't written in 15 years so that is saying a lot.
    Hugs and as always, can't wait to see more
    Your fangirl
    Alpine
    ^_^
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  • From ShouraiChan on February 24, 2009
    *HUGGLES YOU MASSIVELY*

    OMG!!!! WHAT A WONDERFUL CHAPTER!!!!! OMG! I WAS SO HAPPY!!!!!! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY THIS CHAPTER HAS MADE ME!!!! And seriously, I am SO happy that last chapter made me cry! I tear up just thinking about it! Seriously, this chapter has just...blown me away. I like the line about Kagome saying "MEN!" like it was a cuss, lol. And then Kouga's cameo was amusing, lol. Anyways, great job as usual!!! Much, much, MUCH love!!!
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on February 24, 2009
    Yay! That was good a lemon. I neary burst a gut at Koga though. Oh, that's why you threw the game. I think that Inu Yasha would so get him for that... if he wasn't already occupied.
    You made my night with that update. Thanks.
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  • From Alpine02 on February 23, 2009
    Oh Yeah BABY!!!! Whoot Whoot... (does Arsenio hand gesture)

    I loved how it worked out, great job btw... You know, being any rational reader of these fics, I love lemon more than anything... Yes I love the angst but the lemon is why I read...

    Have I told you lately how much I love this story??? I don't think I have... I love this story.. There I said it... Now please proceed to the wonderfully naughty lemon.. Cant wait to see it
    Hugs
    Alpine
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  • From ShouraiChan on February 20, 2009
    Omg...that had me on the edge of my seat! I cannot believe SO much has happened while I've been gone! I CRIED. Like seriously I cried HARD when I read this latest chapter! OMG! LOVE CONQUERS ALL!!!!!! Great freaking chapter, Ai! Much love! Cannot WAIT for the next chapter, lol!
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on February 20, 2009
    Yay! They're reconciled! Cheers!

    And, I can only hope and pray that they will get it. MLK says in his speech that blacks had been freed for 100 years. I told them that in plain English. I also outlined in a very quick run down how Africans-Americans went from being slaves to an equal member of society today (as well as all the others that were helped.) Still don't get it. As some of the older teachers have explained to all of us younger teachers: we can teach all day long until we are blue in the face, and they will only learn once they decide that they want to.

    Anyway, update soon. They so deserve a lemon! Take care.
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  • From Karaumea on February 14, 2009
    Oh, my... Where are the rest of your chapters?! Keep them coming Ai. Even though Sess/Kag fics seem to be more valued around here, I think AFF readers would appreciate an excellent Inu/Kag romance when they find one. I know I do! And when the Valentine's is over, I'll be looking forward to your last chapter.
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  • From Alpine02 on February 12, 2009
    Sure, Sure... Loved this one with the angst... It was great.. I am totally excited to see the next chappy... I will be counting the days and will be on pins and needles until I see it.. Thanks again
    Your fangirl
    Alpine
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on February 11, 2009
    I love that line. LOL Yay!!! I had time to sit down and read. OMG!!! You already know that I am waiting and waiting. She knows now!!! And, it was so good. Please update soon. I cannot wait for the game. It is gonna be a huge thing between the teams and Inu Yasha and Kagome.

    You take care. I have so got to work on my update, but first, the real job calls with tests to grade and a quiz to write. I still can't believe that they thought MLK set the slaves free! And, they wonder why they got a lecture and all that. So sad... Anyway, I get to have fun until they decide that they want to learn.
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  • From Alpine02 on February 03, 2009
    YEAH!!!! (Happy Dance ensues...)

    Just love the angst and the tune was a great call...I love that Ash/Inu have such a depth and that it is really getting complicated for him.. The whole struggling with internal demons kinds of has a new meaning for him (Giggle)

    Please keep up the good work and I look forward, more than ever, to the darker side of this fic.. I am kind of sadistic when it comes to that...
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  • From StarOnMars on February 02, 2009
    Oh. I forgot to add, a good song for InuYasha and Kagome in a fight would be 'Here Without You' by 3 Doors Down
    But my favorite for love song would be With Me by Sum 41.
    -SOM
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  • From StarOnMars on February 02, 2009
    Oh my gosh. What a cliffy. I can't wait until you pop out your next chapter. I have been waiting so long for her to find out. I really enjoyed the way she did too. Yura-ahhaha. Annyways, I really enjoy this fic. The character emotions are really good and detailed. I like how you remember to tei everything in and thee small stuff like Inuyasha changing clothes to be Ash and vise versa. Well done. Can't wait for the next one, please not two weeks. I'll be sooo bummed!
    -SOM
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  • From socalgal on February 02, 2009
    I was immediately drawn to this story because I'm from San Diego, so I know the rivalry you speak of. I'm hooked on this story - full of hentai and angst. Update soon!
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on January 26, 2009
    Ok... I am going to try to leave this review again. It didn't take it for some reason last time... Anyway...

    Loved the updates. I was at the edge of my seat. (And, definitely forgot all about the stomach virus that has been kicking my butt for the last couple of days.) I was so shocked b/c he was going to tell her. You know that was wrong. You had me anxious and excited, then he didn't follow through. This is gonna be big when he finally does.

    Well, I had a list of songs on the review that didn't make it. I agree with the two of the songs already listed.

    "This Love" by Maroon 5
    "Broken" by Seether (duet with Amy Lee)
    "Uninvited" by Alanis Morrisette
    "Not N Cold" by Katy Perry
    "Why Don't You and I" By Alex Band and Carlos Santana
    "Better Than Me" by Hinder
    "End of Heartache" by Killswitch Engage

    Well, update soon. I hope that your sister is feeling a lot better. I've never broken a bone, but I have definitely had my fair share of sprains, twists, joints popped out of place and all of that.
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