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Reviews for A Grudging Loss

By : osherry

From BlueDragon on May 22, 2010
OMG! Where have I been since you started posting this!? Damn school and the Fates *shakes fist at the sky*! What a great story! I love, Love, LOVED it! I just spent the last day or two reading from start to finish. ((Semester's over, I can do that now lol)) It flowed really well. And I would hope it would considering all of your great betas. I must admit, I was slightly jealous when I kept reading who all was helping you out. ;)
The characters cracked me up. I was lmao when Kouga walked in, saw them in bed, leered and said "So if I throw a game... Will you sleep with me?...?..." Yeah that was great, lol. I felt that it was a bit odd that Miroku and Sango weren't as involved in the story as I'm used to, but oh well. The story was fine without it. Everything else was great. I guess as an avid Inuyasha fan, I get really into these stories, lol *grins sheepishly*. Who doesn't though!? Let's face it, we're all here for the same reason! To get some Inu-lovin'! He was so cute n hott! I wish I could tweak his cute lil ears (and then some, BUT that's entirely besides the point)!
I just loved the emotions and chemistry you put between Inu and Kag. The addicting kisses and then FINALLY the great lemons... I absolutely loved it in the last chap when he was talking to his mom. You did a fabulous job with that part, the whole story rocked, but that particular moment REALLY tugged on my heart strings. I think that part really applies to everything Inuyasha. I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who has praised your story and hope this helps your writers-ego out! Bravo!
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From tintin23 on March 28, 2009
Okay...I will be honest, it took me a while to get into this story.....but...now, I just spent the last 12 hours reading it from beginning to end. O.O Just wanted to let you know I love this story never seen this genre before and I totally love it!

Please continue writing, reading your story has actually helped me get over my writers block, I'll be posting an update to my story soon. So thank you, so very much!
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From Knittingknots on March 21, 2009
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!

Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.

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From BeautifulOblivion on March 18, 2009
Thanks. I noticed the new story, but I haven't had the opportunity to read it. I finally finished Twilight. It took me forever to find time to read it, but that is what spring break is for. LOL Well... that and getting a new update ready for Unlimited Determination and possibly Push...

Anyway, I love that conclusion. It was very... sweet... (The lemon was excellent.) I am so going to find your other stories b/c your writing is very intriguing.

Take care. Excellent story.
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From Alpine02 on March 18, 2009
I can't tell you how happy I am to see the way this one ended... It was absolutely perfect.. Thank you so much for being such a great writer and sharing it with us. I will continue to read your stories as you post them.. You know I am a huge fangirl myself
Thanks and Hugs
Alpine
Your fangirl
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From ShouraiChan on March 18, 2009
Wow, I can't believe it's over. I'm glad this story ended well! Congrats on finishing it and I am really starting to like He's My Girl! Already so sexy!!!!
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From BeautifulOblivion on March 11, 2009
Yay! An update!

I figured that there was more to it soon. LOL I started wondering... where do you normally publish your works? I just realized what your a/n said on the first chapter, and I started wondering.

(Spring Break SOON!!!!)

Great update.
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From Alpine02 on March 11, 2009
As always.. A spectacular chappy... I can take the good with the bad when it comes to other peoples comments.. I expect it actually... makes me write better.. I just need to find a good beta but I haven't had too much of a chance to get onto the forum.. too busy working...

Look forward to another chap as always
Arigato AiKisugi-dono
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From Alpine02 on March 09, 2009
Arigato AiKisugi-dono... I will look into that.. Still kind of weirded out by the whole idea of having other people read my stories..

Of course, I loved this chappy... I look forward to seeing how the rest plays out.

Hugs
Alpine
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From BeautifulOblivion on March 07, 2009
Awwww... That was sweet. Hmmmm... Kagome is going to wind up singing with the band. I just know it. Not sure about the whole school thingy yet. LOL

"Like a love sick puppy chasin' you around..." LOL
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From ShouraiChan on March 06, 2009
I SO TOTALLY LOVE YOU NOW!!! YOPU PUT SUPER SMASH BROTHERS IN THERE!!! X3 *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE* Omg, my bf is the BIGGEST SSM freak, omg...! He plays it nonstop, lol! (Ike is SUCH a hottie...EEEEE) Forgive my fangirldom!!!! AND YES, HHNF will be having a lemon soon!!! Everyone is SO antsy for that scene!!! OMG!!!!

But about this latest chapter, OMG, it made me GRIN so much! I was so freaking happy! Damn paparazzi. Yarg...they honestly, honestly drive me insane. But I'm so glad there aren't anymore secrets...! Um...wait...did Inuyasha ever let Kagome know about his deception plot...? Oh, right, right! He did! He did! ADURG...But this story is seriously made of 1000% awesomeness and so are you! great job!!! (Now if I could just get to updating both of my stories and making Inuyasha less assholish...in one of them...)

PS: You have GOTTA love Happosai! What a loveable perv! ~^-^~
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From socalgal on March 04, 2009
This story is pretty good. I like the different setting.
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From BeautifulOblivion on March 03, 2009
Thanks for the update. That was a good lemon. I've been reading Twilight while my students are taking their third mock test. It is a really good book. (I can't help it. I'm bored to tears at work. I've graded everything, filed everything, wrote lesson plans for the next month... I bet you have the picture. I even spun around in my chair until I was dizzy. LOL The things one will do when completely bored. I have three more days of this... Maybe I should take my laptop to work with me... Hmmm... Though there.)

Anyway, update soon.
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From Alpine02 on March 02, 2009
Forgot to mention... I am a Twilight fan too and have read the books a few times, I agree with you on the movie and I can't wait to see how they try to pull off the 2nd book as a movie. The last movie should be awesome though, as long as they get a bit of a better budget for special effects. I am halfway through the Midnight Sun and it makes a lot of things a lot clearer coming from Edwards pov... I think that series could have been even better with a little lemony goodnes??? lol
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From Alpine02 on March 02, 2009
Ohayo AiKisugi-sama!!! Thanks for updating so quick. It was great, as usual. I don't ever think I could be disappointed by this story. I found a song that really seemed to fit when I was reading this one, called Lucky by Jason Mrax(Featuring Colbie Caillat) You should check it out. It's really fluffy but I thought it fit what Inu was going through for most of the story.

I am writing and au fic for Inu/Kag. I have like 6 chappy's done and I have a girlfriend reading them. It's kind of weird though since she is not familiar with the characters. Maybe I should try to find a beta? I should be posting it in the next 2 or 3 weeks. Depends on how I feel it's going.

Can't wait to see more on this one and thanks again hon!
Your's Truly
Alpine *-)
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